|Reviewed by John Domino
|A wonderful poem. This last verse is worth repeating:
"Your spirit, breathes, hears, sees, feels, smells, loves, gives,
what more could "we" ask for in this life?
I am Your friend, a child of God...the caregive of life
what more could "I" ever ask for in this life?"
This IS the question and only "more of Jesus" is the ANSWER!
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|So true, I know I'd not be standing without His strength. Beautifully written, thank you.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|GOD BLESS YOU for sharing your heart OPENLY and with all the Faith, that many NEED to know, feel and beleive!
Amen! To this heart-stopping poem! and prayer! Barbara! Thank YOU!
WRITE ON, when he sees fit!
Much LOVE, Warm Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
I love this poem Barbara, Thank you for getting it out!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Your faith shines here, Barbara. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|This reminds me of a poem I wrote, "My Little Friends in the Basement"
We all must re-LEARN how to be like that little child again . . . full of unconditional love, grinning with surrender, oblivious to prejudice and casting judgements . . . playful, giving . . . curious, only to that which is not understood, and rather than classify or reject the unknown, out of greed or fear or mere, misinterpretation . . . we find ways to include them in our fun!
Oh! ...How our Lord is so much wiser than I! ... To teach me, how I must, unlearn, in order to be, like the One who Masters at it!
All I have to do is say, “I’m sorry . . . ,” and, He is back ringing at my front door again, wanting me to come out and play!
Thanks for sharing your journey’s beginnings, and how your walk with Him has only kept you from having to unlearn, that which should have never been . . .
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|I like how this tells a bit of your religious journey and shows the strength of your faith. Nicely penned!
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|"Oh yess I love this poem
I too often have a morning talk with God
And enjoyed so much!!
Brilliant spiritual write!!
Peace Love and Light..and a Happy 4th of July...Morning Star
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Oh how I love your words, love Holly|
|Reviewed by George Norton
|Very lovely indeed. "For His anger is but for a moment, and His favor is for a life time" (Psalm 30: 5) RSV.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Your faith shines!|
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|This is do beautiful and powerful I had to read it aloud to my sister. I am there with you my sister in Christ. HE IS AN AWESOME GOD, we who know HIM are truely blessed!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|I too knew God from a child on up. He strenghtened my by trials and tribulations too as you said, stronger we get then by going through those things. People who don't believe in you are must missing out on a lot and don't know where they are going in the end. At least we do know we have a heavenly home in heaven., and will see our family members again whom we lost and are here in spirit still though according to God's word. In god we trust and I put my trust in him daily.|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|This is great Barbara...wonderful song of thanksgiving.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|God is Great!|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|A beautiful sharing of your faith and testament to our Lord. Your love shines through !!!!M|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A splendid testament of your faith,and every word reflects how I feel and have felt too, since the age of five. So I know how you feel! Beautifully written as inspired Barbara!...ET|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|The wonderful faith of a child is well expressed in this one. Good work, Barbara!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|I love how you pay respect and tribute to God who has given so much.I'm sure he has a smile on his face as he is proud of the type of person that you've become and also the fact that God has given you talent to express your feelings in poems like this one.Thank you for declaring your love to him
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|I love your words Barbara and it frightens me when I hear someone say they don't believe. For without faith I would feel lost and alone. We may never know why people say they don't believe and yet so many do but seem ashame to admit to it, shame on them. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Simply beautiful Barbara. I'll never understand why some refuse to believe. Well done my friend. God bless.|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|This is a wonderful testimonial of your faith, Barbara. Those who believe in Him will have a more peaceful journey through life. They will sometimes have rain, but the sunshine will surely follow. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Awesome Barbara. So true and heartfelt. I wish I would have had your experience at such a young age. It took me so very many years to get close to getting it right and having a personal relationship with God. I continue to work on this relationship with him, just as we have to work at nourishing our human relationships.
Yet God, his Son Jesus, loves us unconditionally no matter what.
I love it when I sense him walking next to me, the times he surprises me with the littlest of miracles.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|I guess that's why Jesus loved little children. It was their sincerity and honest love of Him that he admired and cautioned us unless you become like little children we may find it difficult to see Christ at life's end.|
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|I really love the strong level of faith that is demonstrated in this piece of work. This is really good !!!
Harold M. Nash