|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|UNFORTUNATELY, LIANA....TIME AND TIDE WAITS FOR NO MAN...WE JUST HAVE TO 'ROLL' ALONG WITH IT. GOOD WRITE AND THANKS FOR SHARING.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Profound and deeply moving Liana! What a beautiful gift you have your poems have gret meaning, which I appreciate very much! May the Lord bless you and grant to you your heart's desires! Be encouraged Liana and keep on writing and sharing!
P.S. Precious Gem you are!
|Reviewed by Mary Metcalf
|such a heartfelt poem, Liana. i enjoyed its flow, it sentiments, its plea all reached out to touch me.
love and hugs
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Stopping time...a concept I'm sure we've all wanted at one point or another. Soul's cravings. Thought-provoking! Best, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Your poems say so much - each and every one that I've had the good fortune to read . . . you are very talented!!
Best to you,
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|When I was 9 years old, now 63, I wanted time to stop and to stay at 9 always. It comes back to me now, and ever since death of husband on 8/17/07 it is more felt than usual. I guess God wanted me to live a longer life and experience 2 marriages and children and all and he has a plan still for my welfare. I trust in him but like this poem and it tells it like it is. Everything oh so true in life today.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I can relate to these sentiments, Liana. Sometimes when I close my eyes it seems I can feel time fly past my face like a breeze. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|The hope that can be felt in your poem is beautiful and fragile against relentless time. But... how can the train of your own existence leave without you? ;) So many different perceptions of life we can have in a lifetime!
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|A heart felt plea. I sometimes wish time could be stopped. Its going by way too fast ! Its hard to go back . Nothing stays the same! Well done .......M|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...it is remembered moments...of things done...and yet unfinished...of wish we wish to stop the time.
you have spoken also of our unspoken wish...
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|If Only time could be stopped
Dreams would be fulfilled
and my eyes would shed no more tears
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|moving request to stop the time
I agreed with Unda
This beautiful words of wisdom must
Have been written by a spirit!!
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|yes, i agree-please stop the time-it goes too fast for this old gal!|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|A gentle moan from a hurting and trembling soul caught by the teeth of time that shreds our weak dreams.
Then again...always is another train coming next.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|this poem is a very moving plea for life to recapture its validity before it's too late ...|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|You bring to light all that encompasses being human, always in search of and never reaching, enjoyed....
|Reviewed by . ignis
|These words were written by a spirit who understood the concept no soul has ever put to words. Mr. Kardiukov's versatile perception allowed him to write from a scope that is an asset to the reputed Russian literal tradition and a gift to those who embrace immaculate beauty. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed being on this page.