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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
11/12/2009 |
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Excellent poem Liana! I found it most interesting!
Much Love,
Always!! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
12/30/2008 |
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| Such deep anguish illuminated, the yearning of the restless soul. Awesome. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
11/1/2008 |
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| Sometimes we feel as if we've lost our soul, yet it is within us but sometimes just out of reach as life affects us. Deep write! Best, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
10/21/2008 |
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Liana,
Soulfully written . . . nicely penned!!
Best wishes,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
6/15/2008 |
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| We are never at peace until our soul finds it home in the heart of God where it was birthed in the first place. Well Done! Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
5/22/2008 |
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| "Why don’t they have remedies From the pain suffocating you?" My favorite line. Beautiful writing with so many questions left to ponder. |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
4/29/2008 |
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| Our soul is found if we look for it. We are never without it, as I understand it. But your write is very interestng about the soul. We need to get out and see the world and not stay in solitude and make friends to find out sould and unite with each other in LOVE. |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
2/23/2008 |
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Intriguing. Many of these thoughts have crossed my mind - often.
God bless you. Kathy |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
2/4/2008 |
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...of the souls eternal longing...you have given me vision in your pen...
well done Liana...
John |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
2/3/2008 |
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| The entire piece is rich in the heart's lifeblood of yearning...as we all seek the remedy found only in love. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
2/2/2008 |
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An outstanding write Liana
Seeking answers we only ask within our minds
Love & Peace
William
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/27/2008 |
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| Deep sentiments in this compelling poem. I pray an answer is found.....M |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/22/2008 |
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Compelling sentiments, Liana. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
12/23/2007 |
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Outstanding and intriguing composition. "The Soul" strikes deep concern on all courses of life.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/16/2007 |
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| thought provoking self-reflection ... you should post more of your work ... |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/11/2007 |
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Thought provoking questions you pen, Liana. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
12/10/2007 |
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Wonderful questioning with a strong poetic feel.
I love these two lines:
"Why don’t they have remedies
From the pain suffocating you?"
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
12/3/2007 |
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| A thought to ponder but I agree with Georg it is we who are blind. |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
12/1/2007 |
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Hi Lina...Wow very deep thoughts
And beautifully expressed yearning
your words left me pondering!!
Outstanding write!!
Love Peace and hugsss....Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
11/24/2007 |
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I love the last line~`*
Outstanding... |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
11/11/2007 |
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Hello Liana,
This is a poem of depth and soul wrenching yearning. I feel a relation to a life from long ago and the struggle to transcend from past pain.
Very well done.
Peace, love, and Light,
Amber "V"
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/2/2007 |
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| a deep and soulful write-well done and thanks for reading and reviewing my work as well |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
10/29/2007 |
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these are echoes of my soul --I know what you're going through..oh yes. I KNOW!!
superb work..
V |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/23/2007 |
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Some fog are gray others are black the color of desperation, it is not the fog that impede us to see, it is because we are blind.
Intriguing poem!
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
10/22/2007 |
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You provoke the mind into pondering your thoughts. The soul, held in such high regard, the essence of our being, nicely written...
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
10/22/2007 |
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So many souls and yet therein lays the mystery ... the yearn of the soul is to live and to find it's Destiny...
nice work...
Art Sun... |
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