|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|WELL DONE...A MOST APPROPRIATE QUESTION...WE HAVE ALL HAD SUCH AN INQUIRY AT ONE TIME OR ANOTHER IN OUR LIVES AND THE ANSWER FOR ME ALWAYS IS...'ALL THINGS WORK TOGETHER FOR GOOD, FOR THEM THAT LOVE GOD'... A VERY GOOD WORK, INDEED, LIANA...A HONEST AND REALISTIC LOOK AT 'HEARTBREAK'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Heartfelt and powerfully written Liana!
|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|Whoa! My dearest Liana, I know much of the heartache and disappointment you share so eloquently in "Star in Love." It is impossible to read and understand these lyrics and to not share your pain. Your sharing is brilliant!
But I have learned to experience and move on. And it is with that boldness of nature that I suggest it's time for the two of us to have a "Night out on the town," perhaps a few laps around the dance floor to an upbeat modern rhythm followed by a quiet candle-lit dinner complete with fragrant rose and a nice glass of wine.
Perhaps we can later give thanks for at least the temporary abatement of pain.
It's time, dear Liana. May I pick you up about nine o'clock?
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Perhaps so we finally learn the lessons of life and love..by which time it is often too late...but if we are luck, sometimes not....
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Perhaps it is so that we recognize the real thing when it enters our life (if we're lucky). Touching verse and I like the personification of the star and the conversational tone this piece takes. Most enjoyable! Warmly, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Skillfully penned . . . well-done!!
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Maybe it is not clear to us now...but one day,I believe, we will know all answers.|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Dreams of loving don't often come true. But we can dream of love always. Spring is for falling in love too and is called Young love or something like that. It doesn't always last either. The answer to the question may be to test you to see if you would be true to that person and to God also and put God first instead of love for another. We always need to put God first and I do.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|They say we will only carry what our shoulders can carry, I believe we all have to go the distance to get to what we are truely worthy of. Thank you for sharing Liana.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|He never fills your heart with
More than it can handle!
I think is because He
wants us to be strong and learn the
Mining of true love!
Excellent question withing!
Peace Love and hugsss....morning Star
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Longing for love and acceptance - what each of us desires. This star knows our pain and suffering. Someday we will know the "whys" that plagued us during our life, but until then ...
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|He sends us that pain so we can know true joy and pure unconditional love...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Heartfelt emotions penned - very well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|A cosmic plight of love that refuses to leave the heavens. Excellent imagery, Liana...these sentiments and emotions can only relate to us who have loved and shall continue to love. Beautiful work.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|This beautiful poem is heaveny as a Star
Heartfelt, oustanding and profound
I h've enjoyed reading it very much
Thank You Liana For sharing this jewel
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|A deep engrossing poem filled with many images . I can feel pain and heart felt emotions.......M Thanks for reviewing my work....
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Heartfelt writing dear friend~`*|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Reading this poem I had a sense of déjà vu, like you had said it before, with others words but with the same old painful feelings.
People that carelessly tread on love, are the same that pull flies wings.
Reading this poems make one to wish one could reach and wrap the trembling one with one warmth embrace of tenderness.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Ask the Almighty for me, my distant friend
Why He fills our hearts with worthless people,
Sends us the pain that wouldn’t abate,
Sends us the love which tortures our souls
For many years to come
Pertinent and heartfelt questions, Liana. Thank you for this sharing. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|good questions--well written poem|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|... a beautiful story told...penned with brilliance of a lost star...asking to renew the shine...of lost love.