|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|A sad, dark tale, but the depth of longing for this true love is palpable and wrenches at this heart! ~Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|A TALE OF LOVE...EVEN IN DEATH. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Yes a dark tale indeed, yet it is a very powerful write!
Excellently done Liana!
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|A noble and epic tale of tortured love,.. not at peace even beyond the grave...but still trying to protect his loved one....
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Yes, very dark indeed - superb poetry here!!
|Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)
|a dark tale indeed..excellent|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|A dark story of broken dreams and unfullfilled love. To forever yearn for something one does not have is a cancerous craving.|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Great story -- thank you! 'Pea' <3|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|great poetic story my dear poetess, thanks :-)|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Unrequited loves burns the soul deeply. The scars are permanent. A most interesting story, beautifully related with your poem. May peace be always with you. JMW|
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Sad and fabulous filled with emotions~`*|
|Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
|Zdrastvie Liana. Ya chuvstvuyu vashe serdtse. I would like to see the Russian versions also. :) --Robert|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|There is so much you express in this poem:
the story, the feelings, the past, the present...
It could be the beginning of a short story or
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Absolutley an outstanding
longing for love write....Leana
You also write themost beautiful
and passionate poetry
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|Very good form.
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Stunning view of deep emotions I also felt
A deep sadness from the refusal of love
As my eyes dance from the beginning
To the end of page!!
Brilliant view of poetic thoughts!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too...Morning Star
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Liana, you continue to prove that narrative poetry is alive and well.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Sad, touching, and beautifully written.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Very deep emotions are felt here through the lines of "Dedication".
One can feel the sounds of passion throughout the reading of this vibrant and romantic lovely composition.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|This is nice work, Liana...though the sadness of a soul tormented by the denied love of his heart screams from the words and thoughts of your poem...nice work...
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Such saddness Liana that is read in the words you write.So many will feel those words. Thank you for sharing.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Very touching indeed...stay safe and well sweet lady..Hugssssssss|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|A drama out of the pages of Tolstoy or Gorky, when the soul is tortured by fate, or the whims of those gods traveling with Siberian winds or hiding in the predawn fog of the slow moving Volga.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A most touching story, Liana. It awakens deep emotion in the one who reads. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...words of sadness...of one so wished for...this love to never truly hold...but only one mans undying passion...until that too was lost. A story of ill fate...you have written with tears of beauty.
very well done Liana...
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|The serenity and overwhelming sadness envelops this tale, of one, a tortured soul many can relate to well...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|A haunting poem of lost love , misfortune and unhappiness. It touches ones soul!....M|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Powerfully penned poignancy, Liana; well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|How unfortunate! Love in vain, passion can sure kill some....great poem Liana!|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Splendid poem that will haunt some lovers as they read it.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Sad and melancholy write, Liana; but very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) And much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|so very sad and forlorn--a well told tale|