|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|HAUNTING QUESTIONS IN THE END...THAT ONLY 'YOU' CAN ANSWER...BECAUSE...THE WIND...DOES NOT SPEAK. WELL DONE! ANOTHER WONDERFUL WORK FROM YOU...SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE AND GOD BLESS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|This is such an excellent write! I really enjoyed reading it Liana, thank you for sharing and caring. Be encouraged!
|Reviewed by Milton Handfield
|Life is like a puzzle we have to put the pieces together in order to make sense out of it.Excellent write.
|Reviewed by randy smith
|The wind! my how it blows, and from what direction? sometimes the wind of change blows into our lives and then rushes away leaving us in a dead calm. great poem rcs|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|You capture the wind so perfectly Liana ~ beautiful and touching. Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Yes...Janus faced and wonderful! You write with such power, and such uniqueness...!!
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|And yes, like you "The Wind" has come and played with me since childhood. I miss her when she is absent; I am fascinated by her destructive tantrums as well as her zephyr-laden days. Like your poem: "who could live without The Wind?" Your poem tells us in such heart-rendering verse, almost all Her secrets.
Fair winds to YOU! michael
|Reviewed by Kenny Baez
|Wild is the wind, Liana, and you have captured its restlessness in this beautiful wind chime of a poem.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
You write with such beauty, and your imagery and words are always exceptionally crafted and delivered to the reader!
|Reviewed by Joanna Leone
|This poem is beautiful. My heart skipped a beat as I read the words, "But I'm partial to the wind, it reminds me of me, my soul..." This is beautifully written. This is truly a well organized poem, with deep meaning. If you have time, please stop by my authors den. I am new to this site and have written a few short stories and a couple of poems. I would love to know what you think.|
|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|I am taken aback by the sense of loneliness and isolation from all of humankind that is inherent in "The Wind." It speaks to me like a fragile soul desperate for love and companionship but relegated to a singular life.
Though there is a slight loss of syntax continuity in moving from Russian to English, the core of Liana's message is not diluted.
Only a sensitive soul pens such revelation of unrequited wanting, pressing for a loyal page and companion but settling for The Wind.
Sad but lovely. Makes me want to hold Liana and take her hurt away.
|Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)
|beautifully crafted and composed|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|"But Iím partial to Wind, it reminds me of me, of my soul"
This is the beautiful line that reveals the heart of the poem/poet.
(The use of "it" for both the ocean and the wind in the second stanza
is a little misleading, in my opinion.)
This is one of your best Liana.
|Reviewed by David Delaney
|The wind is alive & talks, wonderful writing Liana.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I love your personification of the wind, Liana. Very nicely done indeed. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Your presented to me some new images of the wind. One can't see it, but they can sure feel it.|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Brilliant writing Liana
I love your work
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|Absolutely stunning poem you penned. So glad I chanced upon it. Beautifully written with vivid images that blow me away! Well Done! Deborah|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|This is beautifully written, Thank you for sharing with us Liana.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
This is... "THE WIND"... It is the Poem!
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|I will paint the pages of your life with diversity. For I stir all, on land, sea and in the air. I blow the secret of life around and around. God bless. JMW|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|So hauntingly beautiful this is...the second stanza is exquisite.|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...with so much beauty...you write of wind...and I travel in your words...for wind is everything...that carries me through life.
most excellent poetry of richness Liana...
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Wonderfully moving and engaging piece that reaches out and touches the soul....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|love this--especially the 4th stanza|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Powerful , filled with emotion and depth. It touches the soul with its haunting beauty ! The wind can be so many things to a person . You have captured it all in this magnaficent poem!....M|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|This is a really beautiful piece. I have always loved the wind - especially the warm winds of summer that flirt with the flowers and lighten the butterflies' efforts. The wind is that mysterious, unseen breath that reminds us we're alive!|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|...that tears shouldn't be there, ever, and to make it to happen I will be not your only companion and page but your jester that by the command of your sadness will tell you stories as I mime to tickle your sorrow away with the wind of your laugh.
An if I should be the wind for a momen, I will blow that candle light so dreams can come when you close your eyes...and sleep.
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|This is exquisite Liana!!!|
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Liana, I loved your metaphors in this great write. The images brought magnificent imaginations to my mind as I could feel the calling of the wind upon my face. This is an exceptional write.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|I woke up this morning and saw in the paper a song called The Color of Wind and thought I might write a poem about it. Then I read your wonderful take on the ever blowing wind and wondered how close in similarity the one I was to write with yours but in reality not similar at all. Your poem is a masterpiece.|