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| Reviewed by mary metcalf |
10/29/2009 |
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your words speak of sadness deep within the soul, they are compassionate words telling a story for all to know, so well presented for all to feel. i loved your words and felt the pain. excellent poem, liana
love and hugs
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
10/10/2009 |
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Powerful heartfelt poem Liana!
Very well done! and may God's
blessings and His Peace be upon
you!
Much Love
And Prayers!! |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
6/21/2009 |
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| Powerful testimony, Liana! Well done! |
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| Reviewed by Shay White |
6/2/2009 |
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| What a powerful and haunting poem. May they all forever rest in peace! |
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| Reviewed by Milton Handfield |
5/12/2009 |
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A powerful poem.
hugs
milton |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
4/3/2009 |
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"Oh may Liana so much tears so much pain
Its so sad All those "innocent children and their Parents"
My prayers to all
Powerful haunting piece
"City of Angels" shines!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light...Yolie
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| Reviewed by William Hodge |
4/3/2009 |
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i really like this poem
God bless you and thank you for your time !
shawn |
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| Reviewed by kenny baez |
3/2/2009 |
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Haunting poem, Liana, for the fallen flowers of Beslan.
... In the City of Angels the flowers don’t bloom
They are cut and they rest on the stone... |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
2/25/2009 |
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Whenever power is involved, there are always many innocents that suffer.
The imagery is so soft and powerful at the same time; I love the first two stanzas.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson |
1/24/2009 |
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| This is a haunting piece, one that reminds you that life is so very precious and must be protected from harm. |
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| Reviewed by Michael Jones |
1/21/2009 |
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| I pray for the children, I live for the children, and I cry for the children. But I know that one day, if not allready the children that rest in the city of angels, will be lifted on high to rest in peace in the City of God. Thank you for reminding us that our children, the worlds children will not have a future unless we preserve the present which makes the future possible! Peace may it never cease!!! |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
1/17/2009 |
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Good Morning Liana,
Your Translation Is Powerful, and haunting as I read "City of Angels"
I feel the grave of Despair & Loss
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Ken Chartrand |
1/16/2009 |
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| Hello Lianna, I read your poem,"CITY OF ANGELS". I found it well written thoughvery sad. Maybe their souls rest at peace now with your telling of their story. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den" |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
1/16/2009 |
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How sad for all the children and their families...your poem brings the City of Angels to us and we are exposed to its sadness..
nice work Liana...
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
1/15/2009 |
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A powerful, moving poem, Liana. God bless you always.
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
1/15/2009 |
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| A tragic loss. A powerful poem, blessings, Holly |
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| Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle |
1/15/2009 |
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Liana, that is SO sad.You wrote is with much heart and description of what it was like.Thank you for sharing your gift.
With Love,
Cindy |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
1/14/2009 |
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a sad and heartfelt write
love & peace be with you Liana
William |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/14/2009 |
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Deeply meaningful and moving, Liana. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Debra Baker |
1/13/2009 |
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| Liana you captured a dark moment that rise still today in the shadow of smiles never forgotten. The City of Angels a powerful poem. |
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| Reviewed by Teri Ballegeer |
1/13/2009 |
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Liana, first thank you for your comment on my first posting here. It is very much appreciated.
What a raw and heartbreaking work you have created here. Such pointless loss--well captured. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi Benyehu (Reader) |
1/13/2009 |
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An outstanding historic-social composition.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
1/12/2009 |
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At first, I thought this would be about our own "City of Angels" Los Angeles, California USA (which is also a battleground).
Beslan, a town of about 30,000, is in North Ossetia, near the republic of Chechnya, where separatist rebels have been fighting Russian forces since 1999.
On 01 September 2004 terrorists seized hundreds of young students and others hostage in the Beslan town school. The armed militants demanded that Moscow free Chechen rebels. Hundreds of Russian troops had surrounded the school building as various other negotiators attempted to reason with the militants.
Some 330 people -- about half of them children -- were found dead after Russian special forces stormed the school. How they died and whether all of them were killed during the assault is unclear. More than 500 people remain hospitalized. But three days after the event, scores of people were still unaccounted for.
In such an ideological fight, why do they kill children? Such a horrible shard of history.
Ted |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
1/12/2009 |
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| children are the souls of all mankind -- what dementia prevailed to whisk violently away, so many innocent souls -- the earth there shall forever be flowing with tears -- this is a mighty tribute to those innocent children Liana -- may peace invade the hearts of every man -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
1/12/2009 |
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Liana~!
"City of Angels" is an emotive and powerfully written poem!!
LOve and Hugs,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/12/2009 |
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| Sadness fills the lines of this touching poem . It was a human travesty......M |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
1/12/2009 |
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Saddness and tears...and the angels continue to cry
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
1/12/2009 |
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| Liana this is deeply touching and well written. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
1/12/2009 |
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| Such a heartfelt write that tears at the soul. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/11/2009 |
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| such a tragic city built on tortured souls does indeed needs its time for peace ... true empathy emanates from this poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Carol Surber |
1/11/2009 |
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| Heartfelt saddness ...and the angels cry |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
1/11/2009 |
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Liana,
This poem brings back those horrific memories of that fatal day. It shocked and disgusted all people to think that children would be a victim of such crimes. I cannot tell you how much this hurts me to know such terror exists in this world. I have given you a link to a website that is hope of victims and their families from this tragedy.
Here it is: http://www.beslanhope.org
Much peace, love, and light to you dear friend,
Amber "V" Moonstone |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/11/2009 |
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| Can't say it any better than Gene has. What a tragedy. |
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| Reviewed by H Cruz |
1/11/2009 |
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| Wonderful peice! |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
1/11/2009 |
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The almost unimaginable horror and madness of it all...so
skillfully and powerfully expressed in your moving words.
Thanks, Liana. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
1/11/2009 |
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Liana,
This is a heartfelt homage to that terrible tragedy, the images of which still stay in my mind. May each child rest in peace.
John |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
1/11/2009 |
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You share such a beautiful yet heartfelt write with us. You write this straight from your heart. Thank you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
1/11/2009 |
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| Your poem highlights the tragic loss of a beautiful heritage-Children. The terrorist that did this have no souls-shedding innocent blood. God bless the parents who remain. |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
1/11/2009 |
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| Oh Liana this is so beautifully touching but so sad and painful. Your write was magnificant to show the pain of the souls at rest. Heartfelt write my friend and so lovely told. Love and hugs, Bonnie |
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