by Dawn L Mullan
Sunday, October 15, 2006
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Opaque patterns web across the aging twilight.
Reflection meets citrine, ruby, sapphire--
The placid breeze spreads unevenly. Cumulus formations emerge.
Luminous wings expand. Gracious angel, show the world your glory.
Overcast merges with night. Dreams condense. The rain soaked wind roars.
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|Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
|yes, the passion of the weather found in the passion of our emotions.
which are the same. Nice piece Dawn
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Wow excellent unique style of writing
Weather conditions are always on everyone's mind
Love how your words captured such beautiful vividness
Truly a brilliant piece!!
Wising you Peace Love and Light...Yolie
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|I love your style of writing, Dawn -- thank you so much for your review on my poem, an introduction for me, to be aware of your work. This is so flowing, your imagery crisp and real. Again, I love your style.
Hugs and respect,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Your superb imagery serves to emphasize the meaning of this offering, Dawn. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|I agree with Andy, Dawn. The greatest show on earth is the weather, because we are so fascinated by it, that we talk about absent-mindedly. Like right now it is raining here. :D
A very good write Dawn, and thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|The greatest show on earth is the weather..|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
This is exquisite, spiritual poetry! Surrounded by His forces...well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.