Love
by Bruce Alan Humphrey
Thursday, January 18, 2007
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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My heart hums softly. |
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It is late, the room, dark.
I am alone.
My heart hums softly.
Quiescent in its dull slumber, it drums slowly, unaffected.
My head on the pillow, I can hear and feel my blood.
Thump… thump… thump.
It pumps leisurely, unhurried in its attempt to keep me from slumber.
Eyeing a white blank wall, I wait.
Silence has command of the room.
Wind in the outside world causes the house to creak, the windows to rattle.
The room remains still.
A random desire floats out of the black mist of my mind.
A woman’s face, a delicate face, intercedes; eyes staring, all in my mind.
The face begins to smile, small and gentle.
The power of the face dissolves the wall till only the face remains.
Sounds of surging blood I can hear now.
Thumping, drumming, coursing.
My breathing becomes heavy, my true feelings released.
A smile draws across my trembling lips.
Heaviness settles in my chest.
Warm and pleasant the feeling crushes the silence.
The room glows with excitement.
I am alive.
I feel no pain or loneliness for I am in love.
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
11/18/2007 |
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This is an outstanding composition. Emotions boil and poemize every word. It is rich in imagery and feelings. A poetic sublime masterpiece for an enjoable reading.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Jennave Coz |
9/8/2007 |
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| Very nice words so inside, So alive...Perfection painted stillness,Beautifully.Jen |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Mercer |
7/12/2007 |
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| Beautifully expressed with such depth of feeling Bruce, waves of love }}}}}}}}}}}} Barbara |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/9/2007 |
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There is nothing like the power of love to make one feel like living. Nicely expressed, Bruce. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
1/19/2007 |
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| Very nice |
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| Reviewed by Michael Mathieu |
1/19/2007 |
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A passionate write with passion throughout,
Well done,
Michael |
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