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VISION OF THE PERFECT
by Cristian Constantin Icleanu

Sunday, August 12, 2001

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This poem is about what i see and what i want to share to the world as what's perfect...
A little philosophical poem

About perfection there is this word
A white spot on a blackboard,
Is the beggar closing to die
For I ask, perfection never to fly,
As a spotlight without a shadow in
A beautiful tree, as it is never seen.

Unseen tears form unseen faces
Coming from the shadows and braking up the light
Showing me the way, they rule my wold
Whispering words into my pen,
I write on bark and cut as sword
About perfection there is this word.

A white spot on a blackboard,
The perfect mistake for open minded
And the piece of perfection for the visionary,
I see perfection everywhere you see defects.
And how wrong is the flawless perfect…
It can only be the place where death is erect.

Pain you feel and light I see
Pleasure you see and dark I fell
For only through pain you can rise
And so easily fall from pleasure to distrust,
Fear and compassion for the ones that cry
Is the beggar closing to die

For I ask, perfection never to fly,
I'll always hide inside my tree
I wish a flawless perfection will never be
Because destruction awakes in the idea
O a perfect flawless mistake
That will drag you deep beneath the lake.

Where you will see a spot without a sea
And blind man falling into pieces
Ruins of visions and fields without flowers,
A colorless sky with no more clouds
With no rain, you are locked inside your kin
As a spotlight without a shadow in.

A beautiful tree, as it never seen
You will finally be able to see the mistake in
Its role and its perfect beauty,
A bump in the road that changes your direction
It's the flaw that you will never want to miss
It's the thing that kept you from falling into the abyss

A beautiful tree as it is never seen
As a spotlight without a shadow in,
For I ask, perfection I never see
Is a beggar closing to die
A white spot on a white blackboard
About perfection there was this word.

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Reviewed by Sandi Schraut 8/13/2001
This poem has many levels and entices the reader down many paths Very nice!
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 8/12/2001
Very original! Welcome. Janet
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