by Little Miss Aki
Friday, February 16, 2007
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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That which is us together
be it now, be it always, be it never
keep me warm in night time chills
hold my heart prisoner 'gainst its will
take me close, in eyes of such soulful maze
and entrap me there in thy doleful gaze
and so in doing do i become prisoner weak
as to your expression do I, an answer, seek
but the plot uncoils and straightens most swift
and soon, in your kiss and embrace, I know thy drift
but too late do I feel such riptides of passion
I must be carried by such swells to reach heaven's stanchion
and there do we rest in eachothers embrace
victims and victorious in the great Lovers Race.
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|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|A good one, for sure!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Love is all, Miss Aki. You express it well here. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|I really enjoyed your poetic play.|