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Fire and Water
by Little Miss Aki

Thursday, March 29, 2007
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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our personalities don't mix love, let's take these three years and call them what they are...
a loss of steam.

your made of fire
and I love the water
I bring the rain storm
you bring the wild fire
we're passion incarnate
two sides of the world
amazed with eachother
but still our own downfall.

You take the wind
and play with it daily
you hold it captive
and burn it all away.

I take the breeze
and it shakes me loose
I cannot stand against it
nor put it to any real use.

You're made of all flames
and I'm from the deep ocean
I bring the terrible hurricane
you burn all that are floating
we're passion incarnate
two sides of the world
and though we love eachother
it can come to no good.

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Reviewed by richard cederberg 3/30/2007
Delightful and insightful Aki. One of your best!

Light and Wisdom ...
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/29/2007
Strong write and the complexities of a relationship that cannot work is a hard lesson to describe but this work captured it perfectly.

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Reviewed by Edwin Larson 3/29/2007
Great write that illustrates the fact that opposites don't always work out in the end. I love the stanzas;
"You take the wind
and play with it daily
you hold it captive
and burn it all away.

I take the breeze
and it shakes me loose
I cannot stand against it
nor put it to any real use."

Edwin



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