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Nobel House Contest Submission
by Little Miss Aki
Thursday, April 26, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Contest Submission

she dances without moving
she sings without a voice
her eyes do all the talking
she's the answer to your choice
she'll take you where you're going
even if you don't know the way
her stories worth the telling...
but none know what to say.
she's a dream thats worth the dreaming
you'll hold your breath as she smiles
and all thoughts worth the thinking
slow and observe her a while.
hearts that rush in beating
calm and hold against loves rush
such feelings are not fleeting
sometimes they are too much.

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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/26/2007
A winner, in my eyes; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Might want to check "that's" in line 9 and "love's" in line 14. :)
Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. 4/26/2007
Beautiful poetry! Good luck with the contest......


Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/26/2007
Beautiful image of a magical lady almost mythyical in quality. Well done Miss.

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