Days that I've loved you
by Little Miss Aki
Monday, July 02, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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its the 340th anniversary day
of the first time I told you hello
its the 239th day since I admitted
how much I loved you...in my mind
its the 103rd day since I accidentally told you
how much I wanted to hold you hand
on the 104th day, you held mine
by the 98th day we were keeping it secret
friends in public but with stolen smiles
it was on the 73rd day when I told you
to close your eyes... and I kissed you
without your permission
it was 30 seconds later
and you were kissing me back.
Its was on the 54th day last year
when you first saw me cry
and held me close, without words
cause you knew none would help.
It was on the 32nd that I saw you cry
and returned the favor.
Now, its Sunday, and the sun is out
and all the days and nights we have
and all the ones we've kept secret
we'll unleash on the world
to bring Summer a new kind of heat
and they'll say on the 30th day of June
there was a fire and the atmosphere burned
when two hearts became stars on Earth.
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|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Very beautiful and romantic. An exquisite journal of love.
|Reviewed by Gloria Gay
|Sweet and romantic and very original in its development. Well done.|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Congratulations Aki ... this kind of love is rare. Superb write!
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|wow this is fantastic, extremely well written and interesting|