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|Reviewed by Susan Smith
|Wonderfu, humorously crafted a poem of something we all have experienced with creative fonts.
|Reviewed by Sheri Uy
|Hi Connie, I totally agree with you that there are times when sleepless nights aren't so bad after all. I usually take it as a chance to meditate or pray. In the quiet of the night through the gentleness of the stealing dawn, it is the best time to tell Him the stories of your heart. Meaningful write. Thank you for sharing.
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Cool write. This sounds like my every Sunday night so I'm no Monday morning quarterback. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Micki Peluso
|Connie--this was adorable albeit a sleepless subject. I hate most waking up two hours before I have to get up for work and not getting back to sleep. Try meditation or prayer--that often lulls one back to sleep--love the way you used the type fonts!
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|:) Love that format, really makes the poem live and breathe, enjoyed very much :)|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Dear Shee, I'm sure you meant well, but no thank you, I do not want to sleep because of any spell. My Bible tells me that God gives His beloved sleep, and all kidding aside, I love the times when I get up at night--it seems I can hear my Father's voice more clearly in the quiet of the night. I usually read something in the Bible, talk with Him, and often write a new poem or a letter or card. It's a great time for me! Although I may be tired the next day, He gives me enough pep to do what I need to do.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|gosh I hear you..I have been doing the same as late....creative Connie :)|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Daniel Keith
|Oh, so many nights i've been there Connie. May God bless you every day of your life.
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Colorful and very creative poetry Connie. Definately "not boring" as the kids would say. Delightful and expressive!
Not Sleepy? Try Chia tea with milk.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Well described, Connie.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
I've been where you WERE (NICE 2 READ WERE,, HOPE SzLzEzEzPz Resumes quickly 4 YOU! I WAS HERE 2 nights ago and last night up/down and I have to be at Work for 5Am. I almsot stayed HOME to just Write and Home Stuff, but I toughened it OUT and glad I did! I had Cat NapsZzz on My School Bus! During Breaks instaed of rushing home with My Jeep Wrangl. Bad on Gas but, I Love My Jeep! Great Poem and Layout I like it! SZLZEZEZPZ WZEZLZLZ BABILI-BOO- ANd BABILI-Boop! You are to Sleep Sounder Chickens Fly their Coop! Hey, I tried (if you smiled that's Kewl) I Put a Sleeping Spell on "YOU"! Think of it when YOU ARE SLEEPINGZzzzZ... It will make you sleepy!!!! Or think of Canoe in a Large Lake and the Sun beating down but you like it! And you have plenty of waterrr!
BLESSINGS of PEACE and HARMONY, SOULFUL_PurplePassionsSHEEoxxo
WRITE ON! (Maybe your Muse "needs" too! :)
READ ON! Have a Good one or two /etc...lol. (Brownies)