Flitty, Flirty Flight
by Connie Faust
Monday, April 30, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Finally! I saw the first butterfly of Spring, 2012 today-- The yellow Beauty was not buying, just browsing, in the Azalea garden. This flighty poem has been waiting expectantly for this day!
Two flitting, flirting butterflies
Drew circles ‘round the pond;
Gliding, hiding, loop-the-loop,
Then into the forest beyond.
With graceful flight,
They fluttered their wings
As if to bid “Adieu,”
Then kissed the nectar from a rose,
And flitted from my view!
Valley of Beracah
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|Reviewed by R David Fulcher
|Whimsical and light...perfect springtime poem|
|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|Beautiful and fleeting like the butterflies.|
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|A lyrical, lovely poem and so appropriate for spring. I love this contribution, so uplifting!
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|A SURE SIGN OF THE SEASON WE ARE IN...A MOST BEAUTIFUL SIGN GIVEN WITH WONDERFUL IMAGERY HERE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Short, but sweet and beautiful, like catching sight of butterflies in the Azalea on a spring day.
|Reviewed by J Lynn
|I really like your work. It is so heart felt and you see things as I like to. Often when I think of the sweet fragrance of God I think of roses. I love butterflies and the wonderful depiction of the wheelchair was awesome! Great work. I will visit you more often|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Such an enjoyable, pretty, flirty little portrait...
I'm still waiting to see the first Butterfly of Spring...
Perfectly worded for maximum impact...I so enjoyed this...
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Excellent, Connie. Really nice.|