Books by David M Humphrey Sr
From my new book of poetry, 'My Secret Heart', under my pen name, Samishii Suzume, "The Lonely Sparrow"...
Eyes that grab
And hold you
Within their gaze,
Beauty that sways
And humbles you
And sets your heart ablaze,
Eyes that firmly hold you
And shiver you inside,
Eyes that melt you
To your knees
And rock your manly pride,
Eyes both brown and lovely
Hypnotic in their stare,
Eyes that soothe and comfort you,
Draining every care,
Eyes that thrill and startle you
By the passion held within,
Eyes both warm and tender,
The eyes of a truly special friend...
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|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Don't take your eyes off of her!
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|David - I've lived long enough to know what attracts. The eyes have it! ... Always have, always will. Without those eyes and the way they work, nothin' would happen to nobody, no how! But, enough of scientific reporting, let me compliment you writing, and the wonderful messge therein. 'Tis good stuff... fresh.... and flatering... and, I hope it brought you luck on the stock market!
|Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger
|excellent tribute and writing. Mary|
|Reviewed by Rebecca Burns
|That was lovely, she must be beautiful.
|Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
|Very lovely write!!!
Peace & Love, Dove