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Flat Black
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K. Mulroney
Wednesday, February 06, 2008
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And then I thought," What's the blanking point?"
You do this then that. You walk the lemming trail day after
festering, messter-ing, pusster-ing day, and still no
headway is forged.
I dont know, seems the humdrums are the main-drums of
a sane-drums existence. Insanity is under rated and under art-ed these days.
One eyed crooked naked ladies swathed and soaked in color,
are far and few between. Had to be a bit on the woo hoo side to paint it
in the first place. But if you do and you are and you die,
You're a fi-millonaire.
One always leads back to the other.
And again I wrote,
Whats the blanking point?
By: K. Mulroney
12-09-2007
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/7/2008 |
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Sounds like "spinning wheels" to me and written with such elogant flair and style, well done...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
2/7/2008 |
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| I agree wholeheartedly. Liz |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
2/7/2008 |
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I think you've answered your own question in this exciting write...well done!
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
2/7/2008 |
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Intriguing and stimulating.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/7/2008 |
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| Often a most perplexing blanking question. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/6/2008 |
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Damn, K, this one is strongly penned. Rhyme sceme almost rap-like. You made your point, loud and clear!! Love this one.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/6/2008 |
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Sometimes it seems it is pointless indeed and the reasons must be searched for or mined like for gold or diamond...gut when we look deep the point usually comes quite clear.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
2/6/2008 |
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I get to be the first! What fare for reader's to bite into! What IS the blanking point? Well done, fellow poet.
George |
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