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| Reviewed by stan nassano |
5/21/2011 |
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| "If I had known"leaves me breathless...really,such a powerful write, nice work as usual |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/14/2009 |
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| You really are a cynic! My wife tells me that I have the same problem. Not sure it is a problem though. I love the poem. Even cynics have a good day. I hope you have one soon. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader) |
6/13/2009 |
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Interesting last line. Enjoyed.
Legacy |
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| Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard } |
6/13/2009 |
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WOW I found this deep
I think this is one of those poems that has different meaning
to everyone who reads it, depending on what is happening in their lives
For me, I feel this way on days when I have been beaten down by life
Wonderfully written, I enjoyed it
Have a great day
Ray { The Buzzard } |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/1/2009 |
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| i found the poem inspired and well written and the proem a bit obstructive to its intent ... |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/31/2009 |
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W/b good to read you againg
Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Laurie Jay |
5/31/2009 |
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| I have days where I can certainly sympathize with the sentiment here. The first two lines of this are really good; I love the rhythm of the lines. I do think the inconsistent and often incorrect punctuation takes away from the reading experience. The last line is a nice ending for the poem. Good job. |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
5/30/2009 |
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Hi K, Nearly everyone can say, "If I had known"... it's the big IF that we find ourselves living by, only to find that IF never really happens. I sense exhaustion in this write, because I've felt the same way. But I know that it's easy for me to say, If I'd known this or that, I wouldn't have".. but when it comes right down to it, I know that's what I'd like to think I'd do, but coming right down to it, don't know if I would or could change anything. Great write that causes such deep thoughts... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Bennett Kremen |
5/30/2009 |
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| Your life weariness come through. Oh, if only there was a heaven we were once in. But who knows what you'll find on the next "Million Miles". |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/29/2009 |
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Long and healthy be Your life through a blissful creative living Sublime Poet.
I have enjoyed the reading of "A Million Miles for Nothing".
Thank You for adding value to The American Fine Letters.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/29/2009 |
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Good to see you KM! You still have the magic pen that
cuts to the chase,and satisfies the reader! Welcome back!;-)
ET |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/29/2009 |
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| Quite powerful, especially the last two lines. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/28/2009 |
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Thought provoking sentiments from your heart....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/28/2009 |
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I strong write with deep emotions but the color detracted from it and made it hard to read...other than that excellant.
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/28/2009 |
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| Glad you're back. Appreciate your support. Well, a million more to go. We all best get started. I like when life is uphill because downhill usually ends up a bummer. It doesn't sound like you've been having too much fun. Excellent. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/28/2009 |
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Powerfully penned poignancy, K - well done. I've missed you, glad to see you're back.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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