"...born to die by crafted tool?..." is the fate of every poet worth its salt!
Some write about love others love to write, some let others to love them and there are people around that just love.
Life can be a peaceful mist or an storming event, we are bound to wear our galoshes...just in case.
AH...IN THE END, ATER DEALING WITH ALL THE MULTITUDE OF TANGLED THOUGHTS AND EMOTIONS WE GO TO HIM WHO IS ABLE TO 'TAKE US THROUGH'...FOR THERE IS A TOMORROW. WRITTEN WELL AND SO ENJOYED. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS AWESOME WORK. BLESSINGS. JOYCE
Large round of appreciative applause for this emotional and dramatic inspirational. I have never read such a strong voice in the face of adversity and it gives me hope as well...
Outstanding work. I had to read it twice to savor your wording context and take in your metaphore usage. I needed to pick your brain a bit to comprehend what message you were puting forth. You made me think, and that is good for any writer, so important. Great job with this. It brings back memories, and good ones too. Nice hearing from you again. I am always around,
K. I fid this a deeply profound write. My favorite lines and what I think are the crux of the matter. It is absolutely amazing how a little thing like 'ego' can play such a huge role in all our lives.
"Acceptance of fate.
What lunacy we pull upon our fleshy shoulders.
Clash for what was not ours to keep or thus label it a sham to save ones blasted ego."
They say there is a silver lining in all life's problems
Although I haven't found it yet, in some of mine :)
Wonderful piece of poetry, I enjoyed
Have a great day
The Buzzard