|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Excellent poem,very well written,take care
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|I agree with George... damn good writing. Something you may take a look at is the font size you used. It may not accomodate the space needed for each line. That and 25 cent coffee won't get you far.
|Reviewed by George Thompson
|Chilling thoughts. You come through as a real poet's poet.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Undone by the power in these lines, K - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|That last line is the clincher! Like the last tick of a clock run-down. The pendulum just stops. A true power to this, K...
PS Paste from Word or Works. Forget the editor, unless you have plenty of aspirin
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|sweet... this is such an expressive write filled with emotion and love.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
This has a decided sharpness, an edge not completely severe but definitely with the power to cut, and cut it does with great truth and honesty.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Intrnse writing makes a powerful poem with words that ignite!Good one KM...The editor is an enemy, I hate it! As for lines ,if you want to space up or down, hold the shift key and it will line up.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THIS IS A WELL WRITTEN WORK THAT DEPECITS THE WRITER'S ANNOYANCE WITH A 'PROCASTINATOR'...WITH WHAT THE PROCASTINATOR OR THE WRITER MISSED. THNAKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I find this particularly thought-inciding. Love and best wishes,