by K. Mulroney
Wednesday, June 01, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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At the edge of sumac, sassafras and pine, shielded by the folio canopies you adore,
You nestle barefoot atop the carpet of moss, a simple thing the sun had no part in.
Just outside your sanctuaries rim, and the tips of your unfilled fingers,
sway a field of scented samples of all a woman is made of.
I am there, among this splendor and all their pampered beauty.
Buried but standing head to head with the perfection.
As if you were a volcano, they offer themselves to you as a sacrifice.
I won’t tender such obscenities. I can promise there will be no obstacles to where I stand.
In a crowd of beauty, I will stand out, not pushed aside.
Soothing your pain like a warm bath of liquid satin,
caressing your tired skin with a less than perfect touch.
Let the swirl of warm breezes turn you to the heart of this haven you have hidden within.
At the edge of sumac, sassafras and pine, see the brown eyes.
I am there.
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|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|L u s c i o u s !!|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Extraordinary write, KM. Mystery & magic breathe herein...
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Origianal and well written, a unigue write that reads very well.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonderful writing sweet lady....brown eyes are so dreamy sighhhh....Hugss...keep smiling always...|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Oooooh. A brown eyed girl in the garden of Eden. Pleasant eruptions to you. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Awww, an in patience waiting evermore..
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|WONDERFUL IMAGERY...YOU'VE DRAWN A PERFECT PICTURE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|The imagery is beautiful and may all become fullfilled. Such hope and reassurance I read and enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. Liz|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Wow!...this is wonderful, plain and simple. You have woven this prose driven story with strong images and a bit of mystery.