Doug, this is one of your best.
"With the consciousness of a hornet
He wanted to sting every flower he met."
A rich poetic insight this line ...
"dreamless - sleepless
hopeless - reckless
wallowed in the mire" ... this progression paints a picture antithetical to what Christ wants for His creation. So sad, but so many choose the paths that encourage this kind of degradation in character and purpose.
"Only Divine intervention could change the course of the track he traveled on." We all reached these points, many times in defeat and frustration, unwilling to make the next step - for fear of falling deeper, but Divine intervention, God, comes at the last minute, to save us from self-destruction. I hope my tombstone will sat two things:
"She wrote & she prayed."