|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
I love the originality of the line "Wind blowing gritty waves". A profound write with creative metaphors and imagery!
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|What a wonderfully romantic write filled with so much creative symbolism. A lovely read, thank you. Panda :)|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I find an oasis powerfully symbolic and you prove that once again via your verses, Elizabeth. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|Beautiful!!!! I have missed reading you! Glad ya followed!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|love's oasis saved you from a desert of unfulfilled desire ... nice!|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|the caravan has arrived!
and love it is, indeed.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|"hope caving in" is certainly a place that every human being visits more than once in their lives.
I enjoyed the heartcry in this piece to be loved and reanimated from the desert and lethargies of aloneness. A strong statement indeed!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|sounds like love to me...|