|Reviewed by Matthew Wright
|Very nice poem and imagery, great rhythm.|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
I love this one. It shows how you've seen mostly hard times & had to give up your dreams because of it. What I love is the fresh, positive outlook towards the end of this piece. Since I wrote my first book, so many have told me their shoulda, coulda, woulda's. I can't help but tilt my head and look at them as though bewildered. No one should stop working toward their goals until their heart stops beating. It's never too late to turn things around and reach for the stars. I also see another meaning in this one; a recent battle being won with health or a personal situation. This poem is so inspirational, and I love the imagery and meaning. This one goes in my library, Liz!
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|Evolving through ( ) as only you(can)*Evol_Ted|
|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|Poignant and well described. My mother and sister both committed suicide so I know a little about bi-polar disorder. My "White Rosebud" is about depression. I'd like to hear what you think about it.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Lovely writing sweet lady...Happy Holidays....stay safe and well...Hugsssssssss|
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|Very nicely said. Enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Liz, I love your determination,and I wish you all the best in future endeavors!Excellent message poem! Have a blessed Christmas and New Year!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Seems that my whole life is one big struggle.....:(|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|change and motion are the ingredients in leaving behind that which is not long applicable ...|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Beautifully written with very strong imagery....
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Good imagery to show the strong will and knowledge that makes you stay away from what you identified as dark and destructive.
Bad choice... heartache... these words sound sadly familiar.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|This is powerfully penned, Elizabeth. We just move on, because we can. :)
(((HUGS))), love and Merry Christmas,
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|We all face troubles through life but we have to learn from them and move on with a smile that we can and will do better.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|After the struggle there is great relief in the smile of triumph . . .|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)