AuthorsDen.com   Join Free! | Login    
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Kathryn Perry, iWalt Hardester, iNancy Neville, iRichard Tscherne, iPamela Ackerson, iDavid Page, iFrank Ryan, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Elizabeth A. Price

· + Follow Me
· Contact Me
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· Stories
· 161 Titles
· 2,053 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jul, 2006

Elizabeth A. Price, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.




Featured Book
PeaceMaker: A Thriller
by Dan Ronco

Software expert Ray Brown is plunged into a life-or-death contest with PeaceMaker, a deadly artificial intelligence that has infected most of the world's computing device..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members


Books by Elizabeth A. Price
Endlessly
by Elizabeth A. Price
Tuesday, June 10, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow
Recent poems by Elizabeth A. Price
•  Here Is What Was Said
•  Old One Eyed
•  Don't Know Nothing
•  Harvest Time
•  Dangling
           >> View all 138

 

Endlessly
 
Fear grows
For reasons unknown
I search
And can not fathom
What’s found
Down at the bottom
Love ties
I’ve cut and severed
To end
Sorrow I’ve suffered
Low feeling
From low chemistry
That makes
Pain continue endlessly
 
www.authorsden.com/elizabethprice
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 12/6/2008
Hello Liz,

A magnificent penning . . . outstanding!!


Hugs,

Lance
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/6/2008
A compelling and powerfully expressive write, Elizabeth. Love, peace, strength, and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 6/15/2008
Liz,
Thank you for sharing these feelings. You, more than most, know the emotions you express here all too well. I like the title and the last line because they show the depth of your feelings and how there's no escape from them. I continuously think of you as both victim and champion of bipolar illness. I hope you see yourself as champion of it sometimes, too! Love and Hugs to you~
Sheila
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 6/14/2008
yes lifes a TWITCH sometimes, you did it up pretty good :-)
Reviewed by Mary Coe 6/11/2008
Very touching. A powerful write.
Reviewed by Jean Pike 6/11/2008
Liz, this is exquisite writing. I don't have words to add to what the others have already said. Just know I understand...
Reviewed by Axilea MU 6/11/2008
You chose a very fitting format for this poem and the feelings it conveys of something that holds you down, of sorrow that drags you to the bottom. Writing and communicating with other writers can certainly bring lighter feelings and positive thoughts. I hope so...

Axilea
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 6/11/2008
Amazingly succinct resume of the downward spiral that resounds with so much power, speaking into our conscious and unconscious dark bits. It's tough deciding when enough IS, in fact, enough, but knowing that the only way to go thereafter is up puts iron in the soul. But I do know all too well the feeling of that lead in the boots which then infiltrates all your bones, too. There is no pain like emotional pain, that's for sure. Wishing you parting heavens and great updraughts of sunshine and joy to transport you to a happy place. All tunnels come to an end eventually. Bless you, Kate xx
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 6/11/2008
Been there, Liz. Did the low chemistry come after the cut ties, or did the chemistry cause the ties....one of the questions I have to ask myself. You've struck a resonant chord for many here...Jerry
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 6/11/2008
Liz,
There is no worse feeling than fear, it is so emotionally crippling, and physically paralizing....I can feel the anguish in your words well penned about seeking closure & I hope it's doors open & embrace you in your journey
Closure Is Such A Beautiful Blessing
Embraced ~ Embrassť
Vickie
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 6/11/2008
Oh my,excellent writing sweet lady..enjoyed very much...take care OK...Hugs
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/11/2008
'Low feeling from low chemistry that makes pain continue endlessly'-----------BEAUTIFUL, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 6/10/2008
Powerful write here, fear of closeness of intimacy is something i have had to overcome, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 6/10/2008
The fear of intimacy is like a clam being torn from its shell. Your words touch a cord with "flight risk" - relationships that parachute way too soon. Hold on to the feeling a little longer Liz, pull the ripcord a little higher...add layers to the mood...body chemistry is elevated by hormones and pheromones...I sense a vast striving for connection here...good moon viewing and casting fate to the winds will boost your chemistry keeping with your craft of poetry...take care.

Love Always,
Sage
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/10/2008
You reach out and grab my heart with this one. Time needed to gather inner strength and really see that beautiful, strong person in the mirror.....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/10/2008
It's said you have to become fear to conquer it.No easy task,but if we do it then we can erase the low feeling,etc...Excellent write Liz! ET
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 6/10/2008
Low feeling
From low chemistry
That makes
Pain continue endlessly"

Beautiful pen!
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Ostrich Ride and other Tales
  2.  Alice
  3.  the wolf
  4.  The Blessed Blanket
  5.  Gonna Be A Flirt
  6.  A Prisoner's Freedom
  7.  Miss Understood
  8.  A Perfect Day
  9.  Gold-digger
  10.  A Poem for my Paula

Letters From the Earth: Faint Hopes and Lamentations by Lonnie Hicks

This volume has the various elements of Earth speak directly to us. Available at: http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_ss_i_0_12?url=search-alias%3Daps&field-keywords=lonnie+hick..  
BookAds by Silver, Gold and Platinum Members

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.