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No Outlet
by Elizabeth A. Price
Thursday, September 24, 2009
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STuff just keeps happening...


 

No Outlet
 
 
Stagnant waters run deep
No outlet, debris collects for keeps
Dog digs into the neighbor’s yard
Lab work bad, more to be drawn
Babies are crying
Daughter takes off the rings
Wedding bells cracked and the pain stings
Dog chained, can’t dig at all
Safe until the bigger bricks are installed
Babies are happier, all adjusting
Lab work still bad, even more to be drawn
Questions unanswered until the next dawn
Pain downward spiraling
No outlet immobilizing
So just keep trying
 
 

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Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. 10/8/2009
Speedbumps my friend........blips on the radar.......I love your style Liz and I send you peace and love from North Alabama.
Bill :-)
Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley 10/5/2009
a spiral whirlwind of emotional feelings are here
may the light of love's breadth emit some goodness
and embrace you all...and that is one bad bad puppy...
I use a buggy whip to impliment obedience to mine.
The buggy whip reaches far & cracks a sting & makes a
sound they will adhere to once snapped. My one pup
tried diggin the fence by my neighbor & wack!
he hasn't done it since...of course I also said "No Dig"
as I cracked his behind :)
get a whip at a farmers fleet store :)
Good Luck Liz....
Love & Blessings
Vickie
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 9/29/2009
Hang in there, Liz. Internalize that just keep trying, and seek for faith. You are a beautiful person as your writing shows........Jerry
Reviewed by Cryssa C 9/28/2009
It is all about continuing to move forward...at some point the light will shine again.
Cryssa
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 9/27/2009
The depth of pain is palpable, so very emotive and sad, Liz ~Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 9/26/2009
Sounds overwhelming, Liz. Thank you for sharing this personal write. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/25/2009
The last verse of your write is a key, Liz. I do like that flicker of hope that never goes out. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/25/2009
Lis
It's endless and painful this journey, this life experience and you capture that all too true. Well written!

John
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 9/25/2009
Keep hope alive my dear, and someday soon, all will be well.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/25/2009
A brutally and honest write that reads like a journal entry of a tormented soul just trying to make ends meet till the sun comes out someday...and it will.
fee
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/25/2009
So just keep trying

Sometimes, that's about all we can do. Hope better days are ahead.


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