|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Very sad sweet lady but very well done indeed..Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|I'm sorry you're having such a dark time, Liz. I hope the light shines more often from here on. Thanks for sharing this poem. Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Words cannot express.....
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|The process of loss and fear of losing that sometimes makes it more unbearable... clearly and sadly expressed.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Liz, this truly makes you feel the depth of emotion and despair. Well written but oh so sad. ~Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Heart wrenching, but taken literally as well. Get happier soon as you can.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|...this has such a weight..may it be lifted~
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|An extremely sad piece, Elizabeth.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Yandiswa Molose
|Wow! This is tear-jerking Eliz.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|This is deeply moving, Elizabeth.
|Reviewed by Carin Spirit
|'To lose a loved one who is still alive'
This line grabs my heart, very sad and at the same time a beautiful write. Warmth and Love to you, Carin'
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Oh dear. The undertow is so dangerous and the lead suit so heavy. You cannot alone rescue from treacherous waters one who does not wish it so. You atone to a higher power who knows. My heart goes out to you. Patrick|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|A 'WRENCHING' AND 'GRASPING' AT 'STRAWS' IN THE DARKEST OF NIGHT...BUT STILL...A PLEADING...STILL FIGHTING...UNTIL THE END. THE DARKEST HOUR 'IS' JUST BEFORE DAWN... THIS IS A MOST NOTABLE WORK, SO WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|This is a heartfelt write. Much sadness too in this one.
Sandie Angel :o(
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Deeply moving and meaningful are your verses, Liz. You certainly provide ample substance to reflect upon. Love and best wishes to you,