|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|So much meaning in your verses, Elizabeth. Today, your poem is telling me to be ready for the beauty that lies ahead. TY.
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Regis has lead you well on the differences:) A mysterious one, Liz. Brought several scenarios to mind. Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|IT'S A WELL DONE HAIKU...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Andy hit it head on. I got rocks in my head most of the time. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|if he can't smell her fragrance then he is stone!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I love haiku/senryu. Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking one, Liz. From Wikipedia regarding the difference between "haiku" and "senryu": "...they both have a similar construction. A haiku is usually about nature and has more of a serious tone while a senryu is more often about human activities or doings and often has a more joking tone." Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Your message is exquisite, poignantly simple and yet profound!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Some are blind to such beauty, as your poem says.
Indeed, Haiku, but who cares, it's the feel and emotional impact that matter. TY
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my ...so beautiful sweet lady sighhhh...stay safe and well...Hugsss
Chanti Lace xo
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|LOVELY!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
i don't care about the form,
this is the work of a beautiful soul.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
in the beauty
just a few of
your words make
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very lovely indeed no matter what format you want to call it.\fee|
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|So lovely. Joy L. Hale|
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|I believe it's a senryu, Elizabeth (5/7/5) -- and it's lovely. Well done and a pleasure to read.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|This is a combination of the two, Elizabeth. Haiku's are 100% about nature, senryu's are about anything else. The first and last line are senryu's, the middle one, haiku. Matters not they are all, taken together, beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|I am not made of stone but I am a strong person and this is beautiful Elizabeth.
Newfie Hugs, Rose