Stop and start,
Begins and goes,
Along the days
Has measured out
Were an expressway
Without a ramp
Could just shoot along
That neither jarred nor sent us off
To any other place. . .
Leslie P. Garcia
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|Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
|This is really good, Leslie: the stopping, starting, jerking along could be felt in the read. Karen says, it does sound like Dallas or Ft. Worth or even here in Seattle. ~~Bonnie Q|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|"stop and start, start, and wait--" hmm. sounds like downtown dallas!! great write, leslie!! love, your friend, karen lynn. :)|