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Through Double Panes Of Glass
by Bonnie Clark Weatherford
Sunday, November 26, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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They say that the eyes are the windows of the soul. Who knows what really hides behind someone's eyes. In my poem, a person shares what they actually see through their own eyes, an actual window & what they see within their own mind, behind the panes of their eyes. The pain of a heart breaking, the pain of love lost. |
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I gaze at the sun's reflection
mirrored upon metal and chrome
Through double panes of glass I watch
as slivers of light dance and roam.
Across my line of vision
birds occassionally do fly
Through double panes of glass I watch
lost in dreams as life goes by.
Images pass before my eyes
unseen by all but me
Through double panes of glass I watch
scenes from a love that use to be.
Diamonds glitter upon the glass
tears of loss and pain
Through the double panes of my eyes I watch
a heart that weeps in vain.
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
5/25/2007 |
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Brillian work Bonnie, no doubt a keeper!
Love, R&B |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
11/27/2006 |
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A fine skillful poem that speaks fluidly of the subjectivity of what we see, and how we interpret what we see.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
11/27/2006 |
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| Bonnie, that was beautiful. Your poetry is full of emotions. I would not have explained much bforehand. The test of a poem is to see if a reader understood it. You are very lucid and understood perfectly. Excellent poem and one of the best I've read today. I look forwards to reading you again and invite you to my poor den for you are a better poet. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
11/26/2006 |
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"Double Panes"
Twice the shattering?
Twice the pain?
Twice the strength?
The reader is left to contain.
Which one will remain?
Or will they reframe?
Or find great gains?
Honestly written
Beautifully worded
Great title.
DWB
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