A lover's brooding!
by ceegeeess -- --
Saturday, September 23, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Firstlove brings in the mind a sort of confusion experiencing the thrill and brings in shy to act as the mind desires. Afterwards the lover enters into a lot of thoughts about the partner in love and brood about. |
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This time, I shall not miss
To wish himwith a kiss,
Lace him with my hands in embrace!
This time, I close his lips with mine
Allow him not the words worldly;
My mind with deep desire, a beehive,
Dine every second the honey, love divine!
This time reveal all my love to him,
Take a promise of his love to me!
This time I whisper in his ears,
Feel the waves of happiness with no fears!This time, I feel the beat of His heart and tune it with mine
So as to dance in harmony in love!
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
10/24/2006 |
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unique..
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by J M |
9/25/2006 |
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| I enjoyed the refreshing emotions you expressed. |
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| Reviewed by Jane Rodway |
9/24/2006 |
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| This felt like a dance, and each move a new step, a beautiful ending like a spin and dip! Liked this alot, it shows real movement in the words. |
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