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|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I feel this poem is not as great as the First Love poem. Mainly because of the "teds" and the "deds". There are too many of them, and when the poem is being read, it does not give a beautiful flow that is smooth.
However, please keep in mind that this is only my own humble opinion.
Sandie May :o)
P.S. I write expressive unrhymed poetry most of the time.