Sunset At The Pier
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Weslynn McCallister
Wednesday, January 09, 2002
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Dressed in second hand clothing,
living from day to day, he strummed
his guitar on a weathered pier.
As the sun slipped below an azure sea,
he sang lonely tunes of a love lost.
A flash of a brilliant green skirt captured
his eye. The scent of a half forgotten
fragrance drifted heavily in the air.
Glancing up, his gaze met a pair of sea
blue eyes. As he played, she sang words
of a love lost in time.
Together, they walked hand in hand, recapturing their lost love in a blazing tropical sunset.
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
2/6/2009 |
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| This is precious. You are invited to come visit my Christian website. I welcome your comments. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
1/10/2002 |
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Wow! This is great! I just love poem that reads like a love story. Something about the strumming of the guitar has made this poem soooo romantic!
This also reminds me of my own poem "~Waves~" which is in all my sites.
Great work, Weslynn! This can be expanded into a love story.
Thank you for sharing!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (author) |
1/9/2002 |
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| Weslynn, This is close to my heart and reminds me of my own poem 'Return to the tide' of which there are a series, starting with Deja Vu Man and probably 5 others. In any event. Excellent! Janet |
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