by Jamie Cortland
Sunday, October 19, 2003
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A cool autumn breeze ruffled her vibrant hair of burnished red as she strolled down a narrow shell path sprinkled with golden leaves.
Emerging from tall, swaying sea oats surrounding the path, she settled upon a
pale yellow bench near water's edge.
As she gazed upon a bare and desolate beach, the incoming tide gathered its
treasures, returning them to the cool September sea.
A sea bird soared from the heavens, landing nearby as an autumn's sun began to set, casting a blaze of crimson and violet shadows upon the sandy shore.
As the September sea shown in its autumn glory, she rose, her faith renewed by nature's beauty.
Weslynn McCallister, Author
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|Reviewed by John Domino
|Penned like a beautify painting. Bravo!|
|Reviewed by Samuel Stone
|A very nice peace, I enjoyed the read...wishing you well...
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Reviewed by Jennifer Butler
|Very beautiful wording here.|
|Reviewed by Andrew Rafalski
|I've experienced those September seas in California, Lake Michigan, New Jersey, and Venezuela -- and they are different...|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellently crafted ...|
|Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
|very descriptive...intriguing...capturing...good poem.|
|Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
|the quality of time on the sea's edge
viewing it's endlessness
sensing a season fulfilled
dissertation delivered so gently
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Beautiful imagery! Very soft and inspirational write...~Z~|