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Bliss
by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Saturday, May 28, 2011
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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He places his hands on her shoulders
She turns, wraps her arms around his neck
Hands at her waist, he pulls her close

The meat loaf resembled a black brick
Potatoes looked about the same
Salad warm and limp

Peanut butter never tasted as good
As it did eaten cuddled up
In love’s lingering afterglow

© Marcia Miller-Twiford

 

 

Bliss

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Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 5/17/2012
I love peanut butter!

Jane Noponen Perinacci
Reviewed by Jon Willey 7/17/2011
"Bliss" is also on my short list of valued psychological properties. The meatloaf, potatoes and salad are not included on any list of essential values even on my longest list. A sated appetite offers no more than immediate gratification. No sense of importance other than starvation abatement. Marcia Miller-Twiford, I like the way you revealed the concept of loves essential quality for survival. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 7/10/2011
I love the sensual hint and the love throughout. Definitely bliss. I enjoyed it very much. ~Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by richard cederberg 6/9/2011
Wonderful. You have somehow hit the nail on the head, cleanly eliminating the extraneous while cutting to the chase. r
Reviewed by Sally Carter 6/5/2011
What a charming poem! Less is always more, and you leave so much to the reader's imagination. A delightful ending as well.
Reviewed by JMS Bell 5/31/2011
BLISS, INDEED...WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 5/30/2011
Nicely done Marcia! Especially loved the last one.....romantic indeed!

Hugs,
Anna
Reviewed by jude forese 5/29/2011
food and love go hand in hand ... blissful indeed ...
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 5/28/2011
So long as the meat didn't loaf, a warm limp salad is acceptable, hold the carrots;-)Patrick
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/28/2011
Great writing, Marcia; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Andy Turner 5/28/2011
Indeed, everything has a heightened awareness in the afterglow.
Reviewed by D Johnson 5/28/2011
Who need meatloaf when you have true bliss...

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 5/28/2011
So many ways this pen can be taken. So I think I'll take it every way one can. TY for sharing
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 5/28/2011
Oh how I love this one!
It is so beautifully soft and wise, so profoundly peaceful.
Christine



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