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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/24/2007 |
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Thank you for sharing this story, Joyce. You draw in the reader. Love and blessings to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Rene' Bennett |
8/19/2007 |
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Awesome read!! I agree, this could be made into a book if taken just a step further. And an excellent book too!!
Rene' |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
6/3/2007 |
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I love your beautiful poetry, and the inspirtation you find for it
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/18/2007 |
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| I found this poem to be very powerful. YOu have a way of bringing me right into the words with you. I love it. What an excitement! Excellent |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
5/17/2007 |
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| This would make for a good book Joyce. Nicely done! |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
5/15/2007 |
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"Dear Diary"
Joyce a treasure trove of imageries depicted here in this subtle and beautiful serenity divulged through this work.
Thank you for sharing just beautiful,
Sincerely,
From the Heart...
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
5/11/2007 |
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| I really enjoyed this exceptional write Joyce.. I beleive in past lives too! WELL DONE!.......M |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
5/6/2007 |
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OH My at a yard sale, I once found a diary of
an old vessel and their ride and romance before they married!
This write brought it all back!
Loved reading this Joyce1
Thank you for sharing!
YOu really know how to write stories with flair, flow and ease!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
P.s. That little voice is our constant reminder! This was all brought
together in a wonderful mystery! I truly love this!
A gem to treasure! |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
5/6/2007 |
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| Very poignant write .. enjoyed the read! hugs, Myrna |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/4/2007 |
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Interesting to learn how others lived.
Excellent read... |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar |
5/3/2007 |
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I liked the images this brought in front of my eyes! A diary can contain so much of information, so much of us...
Thanks for sharing!
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| Reviewed by d. krusky |
5/3/2007 |
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Excellent write my friend! You certainly know the right words to write on your work. It flows so smoothly with a wonderful story to tell along the way! Great work!
Smiles,
Dorothy |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/3/2007 |
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| Love this Joyce... You sound so like me... you can turn all these thoughts round in your brain in the twinkling of an eye, like a kid's flip book where all the "still" pictures run along with movement as you flick the pages. And, dear me... where do all those years go??? Scary, yet warm and lingering with the permanence and enduring qualities of it all. Very well sketched for us, too. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Karen Cino |
5/2/2007 |
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This is a lovely write filled of memories and love.
~hugs~
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
5/2/2007 |
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| Lovely pen...Hugsssssssssss |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
5/2/2007 |
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| A beautiful poem from one beautiful and precious person! Love you always, Holly |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/2/2007 |
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Enjoyed the read...thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
5/2/2007 |
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| Joyce, what a beautiful reminder to all of us...that within old houses, barns, cedar chests, etc., are treasures that can speak if we take the time to search for them. I loved the mystic of this piece and also the voice I heard when I read it. Thanks for such a wonderful read. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/2/2007 |
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most beautiful reading thanks Joyces
Enjoyed
Love * Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Butch Howard |
5/2/2007 |
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I love the way you portray the mystery and romance of a love that was born so long ago. Marvelous insight into a force that cannot be erased. Well done, Joyce!
~Butch |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/1/2007 |
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| well conceived and a wonderful expression of love's continuing embrace ... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/1/2007 |
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Such an enjoyable read! I felt I was peering into someone's life of long ago, walking through her home, seeing it with her eyes! How beautiful. Really enjoyed the trip down memory lane.....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
5/1/2007 |
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| great poetic story Joyce, the last part is the best |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
5/1/2007 |
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| very tender and lovingly done. congratulations! |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
5/1/2007 |
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Wow I love this journey of the estate sale
And what a wonderful trip it was
You must have been extremely happy
Such A secret Wow
Excellent imagery as I too could smell
The scent of the old paper
Love and Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/1/2007 |
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Joyce thank you for taking us with you it was so very interesting and great fun to see it unfold before us. You are a gifted poet!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
5/1/2007 |
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| Reviewed by Linda Wells |
5/1/2007 |
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This one had me anxious to read the next line! I love estate sales. Sales of any kind, really! I was really caught up in this poem until the last verse kinda stumpted me! Went from 1897 to 2007~ over a hundred year time period. Caught myself thinking! Beautiful writing, as usual Joyce. You never seize to amaze me!
Blessings & Peace,
Linda Wells |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
5/1/2007 |
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| well done indeed...love every creative nook about it |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/1/2007 |
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Beautiful write, Joyce; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/1/2007 |
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AWESOME sharing, Joyce; well done! A peek into past lives, past feelings, past events: I love reading old diaries. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
5/1/2007 |
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| I love this...such subtle romance! |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
5/1/2007 |
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| Joyce, "Dear Diary" may be "just a fun write", but it is beautiful and so well written that it is entirely believable. One can just imagine that woman from decades ago. One can also imagine you going into an ancient old mansion browsing through the books with zeal and a hunger. I love your poems---especially the ones like this that tell a story. |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
5/1/2007 |
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Joyce~you have described my favorite pastime...going to estate sales, discovering old books, past lives and being instilled with awe!
Love this!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/1/2007 |
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another day, another life, another time…
It's truly marvelous whenever we can catch glimpses into past lives. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
5/1/2007 |
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| I love the scent of old books, and a gem you found... |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/1/2007 |
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Recherché mon amí, recherché, vouz écrire avec seigneurie.
Speachless by this pearl.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/1/2007 |
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Joyce,
Exquisite writing my friend. I love the structure and wording of this. Bless You Always, Paul. |
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