|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|The wistful longing for your father winds through this poem and brings hope in the ending.
Thanks for sharing your special memories.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Awww Lady "J"- As you think of him, his character stay strong!
YOu are 1 lucky daughter to have those memories to always treasure!
Your love is strong!
That could never be wrong!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Hello Joyce, theres a lot of love in this, enjoyed reading it. Kind of reminded me of some of my loved ones that I miss. hugs|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|I never knew one of my grandpa's and the other one I was not close to.. but I know my grandchildren miss their Pawpaw just like this...
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|Beautifully and wonderfully worded and expressed. An eye misting and heart touching write! HUGS! SC|
|Reviewed by Sheri Uy
|So beautiful and touching, Joyce. The verses made me recall my own longings for someone very dear to me who passed away not so long ago. Thank you for sharing my dear friend.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Joyce such a beautiful write you share with us as I do believe he has seen all and been with you everyday.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
This is very moving. Thank you for sharing this!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|a beautiful write Joyce
peace be with you
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Joyce this is a beautiful poem
Filled with wonderful memories
But I bilive like Kimmy he is there always!
A very touching write!!
Peace Love and Hugsss to you...Morning Star
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|He's there, he's always there. . .This is so moving, Joyce, and I could feel your love for him in your words, your thoughts of him behind them, in front of them, and with him...
Brought tears to my eyes...*.*
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A touching write, Joyce. Thank you for sharing these heartfelt sentiments. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Awwhh...You brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful but so sad to have someone you miss this much. The smile, their smell, their joy. so touching. Liz|
|Reviewed by E. Farrand
Beautiful thoughts. Hold them dear.
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|A poem so full of love and sincerity for the one you miss. Love Holly|
|Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
|Reviewed by stan nassano
|remembering is always bittersweet,loooking back,
thanks for a sharing,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I think your beloved papaw is with you, even now, smiling down on this wonderful page.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|The tranquility of a moment of peace with the feelings transparency to match the one within the creek's waters, giving with its murmur the softly echo of that voice that once was.
A nice and gentle tribute.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
You pen sad but beautiful memories. Reflections, my friend, can do wonders for the soul and put ones heart at peace. Your dedication to your family, and way of life is an awesome tribute to your papaw. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Lovingly warm and precious portrait of a loved one.
Thank you for sharing Joyce and take care.
Continued blessings to you,
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Wow Joyce this leaves so much for the heart and mind to tackle....
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Oh, Joyce. As I read this, my tears also flowed. Missing family who are no longer with us [except in memories] makes me long for THAT day when we will be reunited. You made my evening!
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Joyce, I lost my Dad 19 years ago,, I was pregnant with my 4th baby,, such a fine line between life and death,, this is so heart touching,, I feel each word,, a Beautiful tribute to your Papaw,, and yes I am sure he can see you and is proud!
|Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
|Beautiful tribute to your Loved one, Joyce.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful tribute to your PaPaw, Joyce; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|We never forget our loved ones who are gone, and they are with us in spirit and that bond is eternal! Wonderful heartwarming poem Joyce,showing the fullness of your heart!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Had he'd been here, he would have seen a beautifully compassionate, loving grand-daughter. :) I'm sorry for your loss, Joyce, never does get easier, does it. My grampa's been gone since 1976, gramma since 1995, Mom in 1990...miss them, still.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|It sounds like a wonderful relationship, Joyce. Won't it be great to sit at the banks of the streams of heaven together?
Since I could not resist tracking you any longer, I feel privileged to be one of the first to read this, your newest contribution.
Your newest Tracker,
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Yes Joyce, it will be worth it all. Very heartfelt write here my friend. May God bless you.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|He is there beside you in your wonderful memories of him that keep him alive.|