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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/26/2009 |
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| Ifind it hard not to go passed by relativies homes who have died. Fascinating they pull me to them if I am only near them on a road. your verses make much sense to me and I feel as you do today and always will. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/25/2009 |
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I watched my home vanish in less than two hours. We raised our children there but apparently, one cannot stop "progress." Thank you, Joyce. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
7/23/2009 |
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This is really a good write Joyce. Even though my mother and I never got along, and she just didn't want to understand, I still miss her and I wish she was still here. But every now and then I feel her with me as I am sitting here typing. You have painted a very good picture of a memory that lasts and lasts. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
7/23/2009 |
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A lovely piece Joyce
Wonderful imagery thanks for sharing
Love & peca be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
7/22/2009 |
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A very lovely work, Joyce.
Just goes to prove that when you hold someone dear in your heart, they're never really ever gone.
And the older I get, the more I cherish my many memories of days gone by.
Thank you for stirring up a heap more!
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
7/22/2009 |
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| good one Joyce, I thought I saw you in your verse, I did, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
7/4/2009 |
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Wow it has an interesting eerie feeling to it
I love it your words capture a beautiful vividness
And love the flow and paranormal of this poem
I am so happy to be able to visit and read
at list today and maybe tomorrow YEAH!!!
Wishing you a safe and Happy 4TH
Yolie
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
6/19/2009 |
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Wow! Eerie and Still Sweet Joyce!
I love this poem!
Such mournful memories creep about in the mind, of those that left something behind for a thought or two!
WRITE ON!
I'm sorry it's been awhile I've been here and been blessed by your heartfelt words, so much happening, But I do MISS you! and I know where to find YOU! :)
Stay Happy and WRITE ON!
Purple Lady Passion, SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/16/2009 |
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Some people's spirits are forever bound into the atmosphere and even the bricks and mortar of a place, aren't they, Joyce? I'm not into ghosts, but I can heartily identify with this: there was one day in particular, probably about a year or so after my mother's death, I kept "seeing" her everywhere... I have no idea why. It's just a tangible way that we can know for sure that the human spirit lives on. A comforting account. Bless you, Kate xx
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
6/16/2009 |
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| This has an eerie feel to it...love it! Holly |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
6/16/2009 |
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A lovely grassroots write
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/16/2009 |
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I like the tone of this one, Joyce. It's soothing to think people live on in our memories. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/15/2009 |
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| Perhaps you did see him! You have captured the essence of life which once was in this wonderful poem! WELL SAID!....M |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/15/2009 |
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| This is beautiful, Joyce, as is all your poetry. The essence of a quaint old yesteryear is seen in this piece. There is an old home place such as this in my family and it holds the memories of many generations. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by The Bear Paw |
6/15/2009 |
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Hi Joyce, This causes me to wonder if I should drive past the old homestead... I care not to, because I've seen to many ghosts in my life... Thank you for sharing this...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/14/2009 |
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| That is the beauty of our mind..we can dream as well as think back in time...never forgetting the ones we miss sooo..love this Joyce! |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
6/14/2009 |
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| Very beautiful writing sweet lady..enjoyed..keep smiling OK..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/14/2009 |
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Joyce, I loved your mystical poem. It stirs emotions of wonder and excitement. I feel energies all the time.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
6/13/2009 |
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This arouses strong feelings of nostalgia and longing to see those who are long gone. A very special piece of writing, just filled with love and warmth.
Love, Connie |
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
6/13/2009 |
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| Love it. |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/13/2009 |
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Beautiful Emotions of Love Joyce!
I see homes like this & my heart cries as I know there must be a reason why things are left unattended...empty flower beds
ivy growing everywhere...It's a sad feeling, "I Thought I Saw You Today..." reaches inside the heart...
Much Love & Inspirations to You
Embraced ~ Embrassι
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
6/13/2009 |
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| Well done, Joyce. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/13/2009 |
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| You describe the ghost well. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/13/2009 |
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Well if someone can live someplace in life, there is no reason they can't stay in death...though they may not even KNOW they are dead, at least as far as the books I've read regards lingering spirits...Ed
(PS: I will be in Kentucky next week, Thursday thru Sunday, but out near Lewisport on the Ohio river...I will think of you as I travel through your beautiful state) |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
6/13/2009 |
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| The ghosts of memories still hang around for years. One can almost see them yet. Well penned! |
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| Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre |
6/13/2009 |
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| Very beautiful Joyce! |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/13/2009 |
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Joyce, you did a wonderful job of taking us with you on this short journey. Brings back s flood of memories.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/13/2009 |
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A warm and loving story/poem filled with superb imagery!
Very touching, Joyce!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/13/2009 |
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| Very sad, but truly heartfelt, Joyce. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/13/2009 |
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Beautiful write, Joyce; well penned!
Keep us both in your prayers today! We need a miracle!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle |
6/13/2009 |
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Joyce, this is so beautifuly written and with such heart and passion. Wonderful!!
With Love,
Cindy |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/13/2009 |
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Sometimes it is not our physical eyes seeing, but our soul that suddenly saw the image of its mate, then, you yourself think that you saw...and maybe you did.
Perfect poem of serenity.
Georg
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
6/13/2009 |
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| Happy to see and read you again Joyce! This was a GREAT poem! I loved the ghostly presence you portrayed. I could see and feel the whoosh of the spirit. Could smell the old hay. Your descriptive writing has gotten very good! Nicely done1 |
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