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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
3/29/2011 |
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I SEE THAT THIS WAS WRITTEN IN 2007 AND THOUGH I UNDERSTAND THAT 'WOUNDS' DO HURT...IT IS MY HOPE AND PRAYER THAT THE 'PAIN' HAS SUBSIDED GREATLY AND THE OPEN GASH HAS BEEN HEALED WITH ONLY THE SCAR REMAINING...AND THAT, OF COURSE, WILL BE THERE...FOREVER. NOT TO TORMENT, BUT TO REMIND YOU OF THE 'ETERNITY' OF LOVE. WELL DONE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
2/28/2008 |
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| Good sentimental writing. I too am grieving still after 7 months. Husband Tom died Aug 17 07 and he was such a good and loving person I can't let him go. This helped. I am not afraid of death as he died in front of me and went peacefully. Was not ready to lose him at age 58 he was, but had to let him go to his maker. |
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| Reviewed by wendy ryals |
9/11/2007 |
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Their is a great beauty in pain....the freedom in expressing yhe core of your soul....when you've begun to see the forgiveness unconditionally brings the love deep from the core of you...blesses me to see, the beauty in your pain...a valuable treasure...it's called growth...May God forever hold you close....
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Wendy |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
9/2/2007 |
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Your hurt and pain is weeping through that most soulful write, may the Angels try your tears once and for all! God Bless You Karen!
Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
8/28/2007 |
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| A sad story that's very well penned. A great write. Hugs and prayers. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
8/27/2007 |
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| OH, Karen. I am sorry for your pain. Bless you. Excellent write. So sad. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/25/2007 |
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I truly hope you can visit your brother soon dear Karen!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
8/24/2007 |
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I hope you can visit with your brother soon.
Stay safe |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
8/24/2007 |
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Thi just goes to show how children would react and think to situations like this. Good write!
Sandie May Angel :o(
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/24/2007 |
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(((Karen)))
Excellently penned sadness: is there anything I can do, besides pray?
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by chris stienstra |
8/24/2007 |
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This poem reaches inside the heart and touches the soul. Sad, but, enlightening at the same time. The depth of your words has me re-reading for a third time. Thank you very much.
Regards,
Chris |
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| Reviewed by tgh dgh |
8/24/2007 |
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| Very sad piece of poetry. it reflected alot and it was very well written.You obivously put alot of emotion into this work. My great uncle was at normandy, he lost many friends there. This poem made me think back to what he told me about that place. |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
8/23/2007 |
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| Very heart-wrenching piece...but so beautifully expressed. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
8/23/2007 |
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| Sometimes putting it down in poetry is a way of giving it over to God, Karen. I agree with all the others that this is a well-done but sad piece, too. When it's time to cry, there's no better place to do it than to wrap yourself in the arms of the Lord. I'll pray for you too as I also bless you for doing the same thing for me when I went through some of the same steps on AD...Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
8/23/2007 |
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| I am begining to wonder what's happening to AD since I was not informed of your poem and I would have lost a beautiful one. Even if sad. But who said sad poems aren't beautiful? Victor |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
8/23/2007 |
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my heart felt your sadness as I could not stop reading
This very emotional piece I felt your dark feelings
But as a child of God your
Faith is being tested because your faith is so strong
And you belong to Him!
My friend I will put you on my daily prayer
And sending you the Peace of the Lord and His Love
Many Hugssss from me to you and anything you need write
To me please....Morning Star
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/23/2007 |
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As dark and somber as you may feel about this, Creator is with you ,and I know you'll keep the faith even if you'd rather not just now. Yet it is at these very times of testing that you prove your love to Him. My heart aches for you and I pray he will help you to recover quickly from this trial.Love and blessings to you Karen! A masterfully written poem!
Love,
ET |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/23/2007 |
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Heartbreaking write, Karen; you are in my prayers! Just stay strong, never give up hope!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :(
Call us soon?? We'd love to talk with cha! |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
8/23/2007 |
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This is good writing and bone chilling at the same time. Enjoyed tremendously!
George |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
8/23/2007 |
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what a "heart-breaker" this one is. And the way you develop it to the shattering conclusion. but the clincher is the name you chose.
shockingly good and heart pierceing! |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
8/23/2007 |
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You have written a sad, yet beautiful
heartfelt poem. Your faith will carry you. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
8/23/2007 |
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This poem brough me back to Omaha beach in Normandy and all the letters that never went, and all the photos that went brownish with time and worst of all, into the third year of the war...the dear John letters.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/23/2007 |
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Karen, Sweetness, you are a beautiful woman. Please do not take on your mother's issue..She found a soul mate. There is no way you will ever convince her to stop. You, my lovely friend, need to fulfill your own heart's desires. Love her, let her go, and remember her for what she was to you and your family, not what she could have been...
I love this poem, so full of tenderness and painful thoughts. You are a wonderful writer, keep on writing,,,
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
8/23/2007 |
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| Heartfelt & then some - This work is absolute & undeniable - Eternal for sure - God bless us all to forward our emotions of love - {Ted} |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
8/23/2007 |
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Karen this is a beautiful written piece and I know it is straight from your heart as it touches mine to read, just keep faith. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
8/23/2007 |
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Oh my Karen this one tugs at the heart! Written with excellence as well as a passion from the heart. We are often tested while here in this life, especially when it involves family...hold tight to your faith, faith is a substance unseen...just as God is unseen, but we know He is there to help carry us through the tough times! Lean on Him...in the mean time know that friends are praying for you...you've penned a superb poem my friend with a beautiful photo to compliment it!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
8/22/2007 |
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| I can feel your heart in this,it is a masterpiece of emotions. I pray for your heart to heal. |
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| Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk |
8/22/2007 |
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Karen...Superbly written...Love the form you have chosen to write this heart tugging poem...May the Lord be with you in your trying
times....Hugs and Love, Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Missy Cross |
8/22/2007 |
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| Karen - Many thoughts and wishes to you in this tough time. It takes sheer guts to put your heart out on the page like this when it's hurting. This piece evokes a bone-crunching pain, and a hope for inner peace for all of the victims of time at the same time. |
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| Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader) |
8/22/2007 |
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Karen I felt your heart in this poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Love, Hugs and Smiles
Pat |
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| Reviewed by Stan Grimes |
8/22/2007 |
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| Marvelous poem. Life is so darn simple, yet it is so darn complicated. |
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| Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader) |
8/22/2007 |
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| Your Faith is being tested because you belong to JESUS CHRIST, nd May God Bless you Karen. "Donny" |
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