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| Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader) |
8/30/2009 |
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A beautiful walk.
Tammy |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/4/2009 |
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Giggle.....wonderful walk with you and your babies...Nicely written, Karen.
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
7/29/2009 |
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Karen I really enjoyed Morning walk with you,
very interesting!!
Love And Prayers
Always!! |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
7/28/2009 |
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LOL. What a calamity these two girls created. Great story, Karen. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
7/13/2009 |
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| very well rhymed family verse Karen, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
7/13/2009 |
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| Delightful and with a touch of wry. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Smith |
7/13/2009 |
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What a pleasant summer memory you captured here!
Susan |
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| Reviewed by C. Stone |
7/11/2009 |
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| A beautiful and refreshing write! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/10/2009 |
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| wonderful capture, Karen ... |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/10/2009 |
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Karen,
This is a delightful poem, full of excellent and astute observation and deep but yet gentle feeling.
John |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
7/10/2009 |
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Your capture is quite palpable Karen, and i'm convinced too that the experience for those guys will be remembered a long while.
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/10/2009 |
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| I enjoyed your excursion . I bet the pups were surprised and scared by the turtles..Great write!....M |
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
7/10/2009 |
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What a delightful experience through your poem! And then the surprise ending "0 !
Thoroughly enjoyed the way you let me follow you by your well-chosen word. I think I felt my own face warm suddenly as I read "people came running, crowds were forming".
~Z. |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
7/9/2009 |
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All good things must come to an end
And time flies when you're having fun.
Walk on. . . . . . .
Doug |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
7/9/2009 |
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| Lovely writing sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
7/9/2009 |
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| Funny and sweet. I can picture it all! Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
7/9/2009 |
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| A beautiful walk it is, Karen, great pen! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/9/2009 |
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Such imagery and love in this poem. I always enjoy your poetry, it is filled with everyday amazements.
Take care my friend,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
7/9/2009 |
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This is a great poem,I enjoy the walk with you :-).Everytime I read your beautiful poems,it makes me smile.take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
7/8/2009 |
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| What a fun day. Glad the pups weren't lunch for the snappers. Our two dogs have no use for the water..and one of them a black lab. Go figure. Great poem Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
7/8/2009 |
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What a trip!!:) Thank you so much for letting me tag along. Love puppies and kiddies and could feel the warmth of the sun and that blue, blue sky. Got a bit damp, but hey~! Don't get a vacation
every day!! Kudos & chuckles, xOx 'Pea' xOx |
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
7/8/2009 |
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| I love to read your poetry Karen...feels like I'm right there with you, love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/8/2009 |
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| Thanks for sharing your lovely, leisurely walk, Karen--leisurely until your pups encountered the three water monsters. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/8/2009 |
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| MY...THIS WAS A WONDERFUL READ. THE PHRASES AND RHYME DREW SUCH A CLEAR IMAGERY....I WALKED WITH YOU AND SAW WHAT YOU SAW, FELT WHAT YOU FELT. DONE VERY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS. JOYCE |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
7/8/2009 |
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| :))... puppies will be... puppies!!! Enjoyed this romp, Karen. My own retriever will not go in the sea herself but delights to force me in whenever she can... I'm entirely bullied but love it. It's so delightful when they exhibit such human traits as joy, teasing, curiousness... trouble-making!!! :)) Back to a backyard of clover don't sound too bad, though... Now they can dream of just how BIG AND BRAVE they both were! Delightful, thank you. Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
7/8/2009 |
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A delightful vision you have captured enjoyable to read!
Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
7/8/2009 |
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It is always enjoyable
to walk along with you...
greeting the neighbors
and seeing the view. :~)
Hugs,
Cryssa :~)
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
7/8/2009 |
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| Cute one, Karen. That was surely an adventuresome day. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/8/2009 |
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Wonderful imagery, Karen, and I love the piccy! Very nice; brava!
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~
As always, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/8/2009 |
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..this puts a smile on my face..played out like a cartoon....wonderful setting Karen, like you took me right there.
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
7/8/2009 |
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Karen,
A very relaxing read about a beautiful day. And the puppies and tortoises, that topped it.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/8/2009 |
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Precious, Karen, the serenity and love in these lines - thank you, an instant vacation! You bring the scenes to vivid life, let us experience the joys through your eyes - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
And the more they barked at it, the more slowly it moved, right? LOL |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/8/2009 |
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Love it and can truly understand them being startled by those shelled demons...lol, I mean if I came accross something that is almost the same size as me but that ugly I'd be pretty tempted to run all the way home. Does sound like an ideal moment captured in your wonderful magic write.
hugs
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
7/8/2009 |
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| a morning to remember -- the tranquility of nature with your pups -- it doesn't get much better than that Karen -- thanks for sharing your delightful morning with me -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
7/8/2009 |
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| Sounds like a truly marvelous morning walk - nature and pets; it doesn't get any better than that. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
7/8/2009 |
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| I needed that this morning, Karen. Well written with great humor and super imagery too. Well done, my friend. God bless. |
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| Reviewed by larry linville |
7/8/2009 |
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| I feel so refreshed -- like I'd been there. Now I'm ready for my day. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/8/2009 |
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I wonder if a turtles days are as long as our days, if hours go by slowly as they go. Hear that some turtles live for over 300 years, and that's a very slow loooooooooooong time! LOL
Georg
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
7/7/2009 |
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I Could Only Wish I Enjoyed Your Vacation, So, At Very Least I Enjoy Your Aspiring Poems Writes...
I Use Want To Go To Singapore,Sadly, Now I Can't Wait To Get Off Evil Planet,And As I TRASK Will Do Just That,Believe Me My Hand And Those Of Little Children Will Be Out Whence That Moment Comes So Very Soon...
Your Friend TRASK... |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
7/7/2009 |
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Awesome write, thank you for sharing, hope you are having a good summer
In Christs Love
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/7/2009 |
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| What kind of RV have you got, Karen & don't you know there are leash laws for snapper turtles...;-) Ed |
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