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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
6/12/2011 |
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How lovely this is written. Waiting is a sad time. I know what that is like.
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| Reviewed by baz busbe |
3/5/2011 |
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| I can really relate to this and can feel the pain of waiting for a loved one. Beautiful photo. God bless. Baz |
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| Reviewed by Regis Schilken |
1/10/2011 |
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Seems like we are all haunted by love or loss of it.
Another time, another place..... for some reason makes me think about my wife of 44 years. I'm already thinking that one of us must pass on before the other. I hope I'm first.
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| Reviewed by Sheri Uy |
1/5/2011 |
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My dear Karen, this is just sooo beautiful. I can relate a hundred percent...Sometimes waiting is hell but when you have good memories and dreams to hold on to, the waiting becomes worthwhile. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and blessings to you.
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
12/17/2010 |
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| A VERY GOOD WORK HERE. THE ESSENCE OF YEARNING AND EXPECTANCY FILLS EACH WELL CHOSEN PHRASE PRODUCING A CLEAR IMAGE OF HOPE AND LONGING, WHILE YOUR RHYME SCHEME AND RHYTHM SURROUNDS AND SOLIDLY SUPPORTS THE THEME. ENJOYED AND APPRECIATED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
12/14/2010 |
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This is absolutely beautiful Karen. Heartfelt and deeply moving! You took me to such a peaceful and scenic place! Much appreciated! As always Robert has done an excellent job creating this master piece. Please tell him to keep up the good work! Give those adorable two hugs for me! ( hope they are well) ! Thanks for sharing and for caring Karen! Blessings to you and Robert!!!
Much Love,
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
12/12/2010 |
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Fewer visits make the heart grow fonder, but when it is a loved one we wait for, those visits grow and grow...hopefully. I still wait on a shore of a kind for my soul to appear, but it has escaped me I fear.
This is such a romantic poem Karen, waiting for someone that is in your heart to return. So lovely and pure as the new fallen snow. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and by your side. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & MANY SISTERLY ((((((((((((((((HUGGGSSS)))))))))))))), your little sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
12/11/2010 |
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| Absence might make the heart grow fonder but it sure makes a mess of everything else. Wonderfully penned. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
12/7/2010 |
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| Lovelorn romance in abundance. So gently and delicately woven within this story/poem. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
12/6/2010 |
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I really enjoyed the atmosphere you created in this piece, Karen. Glorious scenery. Love and hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
12/4/2010 |
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| I have to heartily agree with Fee, Karen. This write is so satisfying to the lovelorn soul and such a comfort. So much emotion comes through your beautiful lines and I feel like I have read a novel in the space of just a few precious moments. Distilled and enduring work, bless you. xx |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/4/2010 |
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I am speechless after reading this one Karen. It so perfectly captures the longing of a love that will not die but remain a hope for a lifetime. The vividness of your descritions of sun sea and sand only increase the bitter sweet passion in each and every line of this write. Well done...well done.
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
12/3/2010 |
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| so beautiful, a snowy dream ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
12/3/2010 |
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A poet with heart and soul you are, Karen.
This is beautiful.
John |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
12/3/2010 |
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| You had me with the first line Karen. You have the heart of a romantic. Happy holidays to you and yours ... richard |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
12/3/2010 |
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Just plain Lovely!!
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/3/2010 |
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| dazzling, enchanted, emotionally uplifting ... |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
12/3/2010 |
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Filled with hope and love and faith.
Love that last stanza. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
12/3/2010 |
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| Very beautiful poetry each word like a crystal chandelier they sparkle |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/3/2010 |
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Quite powerful - waiting truly is the hardest part.
PS: And I hope that tiny ragamuffin orphan at your front door won't have to wait very long for a loving new home. |
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| Reviewed by Michael Jones |
12/3/2010 |
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| Yes and Amen, Merry Christmas to You, Robert, and all of your children, puppies, kittens: Have a healthy, wealthy, and prosperous New Year and may the whole commonwealth of heaven continue to be at your disposal! Peace!!! |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
12/3/2010 |
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| HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
12/3/2010 |
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| An excellent write indeed, Karen. |
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| Reviewed by lili dauphin |
12/2/2010 |
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| So beautiful Karen! You are blessed. |
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| Reviewed by Clarrissa Moon |
12/2/2010 |
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| This was so heart pulling thanks for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/2/2010 |
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Heart weighs heavy with the passage of time,
waiting for your return, again to be as one.
Your verses are soul-reaching in emotionally awakening, Karen. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Chip Bergeron |
12/2/2010 |
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Karen:
I know you probably meant this as a contemporary story, ut all I can picture as I read this is a World War II image of a woman saying goodbye to her husband as he goes off to war and then waiting in worried anticipation for his return...
Chip Bergeron |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
12/2/2010 |
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You write so beautifully, Karen. I could feel the hurt of a lost love. Enjoyed very much.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
12/2/2010 |
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Written so beautifully, so deeply from the heart, Karen.
Truly inspiring, to read of this genuine kind of love.
Blessings,
Christine |
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