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| Reviewed by Patricia Shaw |
5/20/2007 |
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| Wiy me thinks me sees thee sweat ore thee browe b'neath the red towre--Yep! yts the fortunea kynge, Brett Nicholas Moore...Pondering Keats...How long would it take to stare out the tower window before a poem strikes my mynde? Cleverly wrytten |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/25/2007 |
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| a touch of old english fares ye pen well ... |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/25/2007 |
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| Fantastic style........this took thought....loved it! |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
4/24/2007 |
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"Fortune is merry. And in this mood will give us anything"
SHAKESPEARE
You have created such a mood...
Well done Brett!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/24/2007 |
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You sure got my attention, bro. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Tactfully Naive |
4/24/2007 |
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Written at a time when type writers were bereft of certain letters.
Mind you, as a Scot, I speak with an accent that is economic in its use of letters eg 'whauryegan'?'= 'Where are you going?'
Watch out for a poet bearing fortune cookie?
May good fortune indeed shine upon your blessed brow.
Regards
Dai |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
4/12/2007 |
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| :)!! |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
4/12/2007 |
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not sure why...but I did not have much of a problem with the creative streak you used here...maybe it is cause I spell Ernie, Erny...
I like to see folks get down and boogie with the language from time to time...this is such a piece...sharp and well done. |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
4/11/2007 |
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Brett...you lost me back at "I stand yn a time of weakness
betwene my god and my kyngedom"
I believe those were the first two lines? Now I have a headache. I almost thought I had been drinking and tried to cross my eyes to see better, lol! Kidding aside, it was great stuff!
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/7/2007 |
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It's like trying to decipher the orginals of Canabury Tales or Pilgrims Progress, in ye ole Inklish..
But loved it, tried to read it last night, but after a few beers, lol. I went to bed..lol |
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| Reviewed by Jerelyn Craden |
4/7/2007 |
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| Great play with language. Why not create your own? Fascinating how it's understood. And, as always, a combination of profound, quirky, and uniquely Brett-funny. Jerelyn |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
4/6/2007 |
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different
very interesting....
enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Frances Lynn |
4/6/2007 |
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Did they talk like this in the Medieval times, I wonder?! Brett, you are witty, clever and original as always. Incidentally, Tales of Brother Goose deserves to be the moern day version of Aesop's Fables!
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
4/5/2007 |
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| This was very cool! Enjoyed so much, holly |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
4/5/2007 |
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I thought my glasses were dirty at first. Then I thought that maybe several of the keys on your keyboard had died and you were struggling.
After clearing my throat, and cleaning the lenses, though, I began understanding that you were just blurring the boundaries of conventionalism with your wit.
Light and Wisdom ... |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
4/5/2007 |
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| funn ode thaht a grete eforte forjgedd anyd priemordiale theame. cheerse! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/5/2007 |
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Most interesting write.....looks like you lost your spelchecr....lol!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Crissy Foster |
4/4/2007 |
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| That's really an excellent poem I read it twice. but what's with all the spelling errors? I think maybe I misunderstood that one. |
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