|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Being lonely is not fun but it sometimes the choice many of us make. Been there once or twice and not again. Keeping busy tends to push lonliness away too.. at least for me. But it comes and goes tenderly.|
|Reviewed by firstname.lastname@example.org Bennett
|A BEAUTIFUL WRITE AND A PLEASURE TO EMBARK UPON SUCH FINE WELL WRITTENA AND EXPRESSED WORK.|
|Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson
|Its a beautiful poem ! T|
|Reviewed by Manes Pierre, Ph.D.
Great dedication! We are increasingly living in a lonely world. Big houses! Big cars! Big bank account! But at the end of the day, there is no one to trust or share nothing with.
I appreciate your taking to time to think about the lonely ones.
|Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Too much loneliness in this world
and the funny thing is even when
others are around you can feel so
lonely. I think cupid ought to come
around every day. ;)
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Great dedication. Sometimes I feel lonely. This is a beautiful offering. Thank you, Victoria. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|An uncomplicated technique is often the best way to deliver such a powerful message. Well written.
|Reviewed by Debra Conklin
|This feeling is one I'm sure most of us have gone through and you've described it very nicely.
|Reviewed by Steve Robertson
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Lovely poem to all the lonley hearts out there. I hope they are touched by your lovely and thoughtful poem
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|this was really a sweet poetic piece Victoria. the only thing about it is, so many people end up being lonely because they feel that a mate should take care of all their needs, then when it doesn't happen they're baCK out looking again only to run into the same disappointment. hIGH expectations end up being no relations. i've made it for the last twenty years with my wife because I don't fall for the traditional crap. Don't take me wrong now, it's great to have a mate who will live up to your poem, but the true life facts are, "one or two in a million baby." I expect nothing so I don't get frustrated when nothing happens. My wifes in her own little world, which is fine with me. One fact stands strong though, she and I do have a lot of fun. hugs G|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|So beautiful and very true are these poetic words of yours!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Wonderful write and dedication.|
|Reviewed by D. Enise
|Oh, (((((( Victory!!)))))))) This is Excellent!! When you find that Cupid, send him my way !! *S*
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
|Dear Victria, this is quite impressive poem.
I love its simplicity and frankness in style of writing.
|Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)
|Nicely done; been there, done that, felt that...~DarkBard~|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Yes, there ought to be, but this one does me good, Victoria. I like the simplicity and the strength in these words. Thank you for sharing...