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My Beating Heart
by Chuck Keller
Thursday, December 07, 2006
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Do you feel my beating heart?
As, spent, we lie in love's embrace,
Your head against my chest,
Rising and falling as I gasp
To regain my drained strength.
I feel your breath moving
Hairs to and fro, eyes closed
Slowly caressing me with fingers
That send such fire and passion
Through me with each electric touch.
Butterflies swarm in my belly
With each moan from you,
With each gasp and sigh from you,
With each whispered, "I love you."
Do you feel my beating heart?
Pounding, sounding like bombs
On a battlefield exploding!
Do you feel me inside you?
Throbbing with each heartbeat,
Still on fire and sensing
Each exquisite spasm.
As your soul swallows mine,
As your essence swallows mine,
As your core burns as mine.
Do you feel my throbbing passion?
Do you know how I adore you?
You do know... Don't you?

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Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader) 1/28/2008
This is a wonderfully developed poem full of unrestrained passion, abundant tenderness, and white-hot love from the title through to the question at the closing. I enjoyed the vibrant imagery displaying each lovingly rendered line to the reader in a ceaseless flow, communicating your energy and intensity throughout. You adeptly create the scene and persistently draw us into it. I particularly enjoyed the lines "as your soul swallows mine" and "as your core burns with mine." Nicely done.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 1/28/2008
Sensual, romantic, enticing. Lucky both of you. Liz
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 9/28/2007

Interesting composition singing sensual emotions. "My Beating Heart" is a
romantic-libidinal depicting of passion and desires.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan 1/3/2007
I am amused at coincidental similarities...as we both tend to be consumed by romance in poetry...we share the same thoughts, just different words and phrasing. Each of us dreaming the dream but through different eyes at different moments...the sentiment is wonderfully the same...but your's is as interestingly male as mine is female.
xo Taylor
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 12/9/2006
Very nice poem
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu 12/8/2006
Very romantic and heartfelt.
Loved your write.

Michael
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