|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
"Eternal Love" abounds in sublime inspiration.
A revision of line ten can improve the rhythm of the second strophe.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|Wow, I can oicture your two souls meting in that heavenly place beyond the moon.|
|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|The perfect gift for your leading lady...
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|What a lovely sonnet; and a wonderful gift for your wife, Chuck. Thank you for sharing it. Love and blessings to you,
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|When a man writes such beautiful words...it makes my heart skip a beat, in knowing, that they too, can express themselves all sensitive, touching that soft spot many run away from to avoid...
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|You have penned a most beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your loving wife and it just makes my heart sing out in joy......
|Reviewed by Missy Cross
|"Iíll wait behind the moon for you someday..."
That's just lovely. What a wonderful piece. Your wife is a lucky woman!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|What a lovely tribute to what real love is; congratulations to you and your wife, Chuck. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|How inspiring, a portrait of real love. I hope her beautiful blue eyes are the last and first thing you see Chuck.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|How beautfiul,great writing chuck...Hugsss|