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Ashes
by jeff potter
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Inspired by a short verse about the pheonix I wrote this short verse myself; always wondered whether I should add to it?


 

“Yet there once was that final faltering breath. A mound of ashes betrayed her passage and announced her death.


Millennia memories laid down, not to decay; left undisturbed to dream… and rise another day”   

 
 



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Reviewed by jeff potter
Thanks Reg,
just spent an absorbing half-hour looking at your Poetry and came away deeply moved

Jeff
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
I do not think you need to add to this, Jeff. I think the message, as Dai alludes to, can be inferred. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett
It is always an indeed pleasure to read such fine well written artistic worksuch as this. I admire your strength and ability to put this together so with that said just write on poet.
Reviewed by Approximately Naive
'Left undisturbed to dream… and rise another day'

Inferrence will do the adding, Jeff.
This line brings closure, yet also opens the way for hope...

A millenia of memories only a small pile of ashes high? Poignant thought.
A short but profound verse.
David
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