|Reviewed by J M
|A fan of Dais work am I.. This poem has such deep depth and concious lessons of the subconcious wonderful work A piece that could be read over and over to gleams each message within the seams of a perfect poem...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Suddenly, there is a chill in the air: this one is powefully effective and vividly felt. I n c r e d i b l e lines. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|This is truly thought provoking and full of incredible imagery.|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|wow deep with much feelings
(i love these kinds of poems)
dark images cold and wet
|Reviewed by Tactfully Naive
|I often meander along a blank canvas in search of a sensation upon which to drop my intuitive anchor. My canvas only has the dark background painted. Submerged within this is my periodical frayed brush strokes of darker still pessimism. Occasionally, with brush in my other hand, a face appears that blossoms into optimism.
I had to walk alongside you here, Jeff.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|thought provoking content and imagery successfully bring this poem into the surface of subconscious emotion, jeff ...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The imagery that you have chosen serves to emphasize the meaning of this write, Jeff. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Subconscious is a thought provoking write.