Lover of my soul
by jeff potter
Saturday, March 17, 2007
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As waves hit the beach every 8 seconds so the grace of God continuosly washes clean
“You wash me clean and make me whole incessant lover of my soul undo the hurt negate the pain diffuse debasing self-disdain
When guilt runs rife through self-defeat when life's in tatters round my feet you press the arrow marked “DELETE”. You loose the fetters let me go incessant lover of my soul
Self-sacrifice for humankind pierces my heart and blows my mind you break the bonds say ‘free to go’ eternal lover of my soul”
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|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Another amazing poem showing deep appreciation and acceptance of God's marvelous grace. I've already sent it to my library. I love this one!|
|Reviewed by J M
|Jeff, I am blowed away daily with his awesome sacrifice and love for all of us.... This is a keeper for me.... Thank you for sharing the wealth of his love within this poem. Loved art too..
Self-sacrifice for humankind pierces my heart and blows my mind you break the bonds say ‘free to go’ eternal lover of my soul”"
|Reviewed by jeff potter
|Course Gods love can be impetuous; you've never felt ravished by Gods love?|
|Reviewed by Approximately Naive
|Figureatively speaking, I guess salvation is our lover, in the purist sense.
'impetuous lover of my soul'
Can God's love be impetuous?
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Inspiring, beautiful verse, Jeff, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Needed this today. Thanks.
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|This is a reminder to this reader to keep the faith and never give in...great write.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A fine testimonial of your faith, Jeff. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Yes, God is always there to wipe the slate clean. Thanks for reminding us of this. I admire your poetry, Jeff.
Many blessings to you,