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In a mist of dreams
We can sometimes walk
A line between reality
and place we feel safe
Where clouds of illusions
can almost seem real
and we block out intrusions
from the rest of the world.
A safe place to harbor
our inner most feelings
Where we're in control
reflections of the past,
mingle with dreams of tomorrow.
And become alive from our hopes
where time doesn't matter
A dangerous place,
on the edge of what's sane.
Do we walk away?
Or float deeper within.
In the mists of illusions
So soft the clouds are,
Gently fooling ones mind,
ones spirit, ones soul.
The clock on the wall,
Stands frozen in time,
The reality is,
Time is..still ticking by.
Live each moment
Life is so very short
If you do let time stand still,
Don't let it keep you there.
In an illusion of what
A Safe Place.
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Life, does not stop when are dreams become shattered,
Our hearts broken, or we loose a position.
We may find ourselves feeling hopeless at different times in our lives
And we can retreat into different places of "hiding"..Places to take a break,
Regroup, rejuvenate, cry, and heal.
We can, come back stronger..
When we choose to come back.
This is a place I had gone to, quiet some time back.
At the time, I thought I could not/ would not,
I did not "want" to, live through it.
I wanted to stay in that place in the clouds.
Part of me, is a survivor and though when I did come back out of the clouds.
it felt like walking through all the fires of hell,
I found a strength in myself and so much more than that,
than I ever dreamed I could possibly posses.
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|Reviewed by Victoria Murray
|Very nicely stated Jen!
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|This is such wonderful advice and so very true it good to be reminded because so many of us stop and be afraid, uninspired or whatever to go any further....a wonderful poem ,wonderful selection of music, and a nice pic.........thanks for sharing!!!|
|Reviewed by Claywoman
|Great poem and the music makes me cry...always did have a soft spot in my heart for John Lennon...|
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|i only wish our muse would speak to me so eloquently. lovely, lovely message.
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
I have to say that this
is one of your masterpieces.
|Reviewed by Tiana
|Absolutely beautiful, Jen...|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Jen...this is superb!! I am so glad you found that inner strength. Excellent write.
|Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
|You're right. Life doesn't stop with shattered dreams...excellent write Jen!|
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|thank you...and I love this song
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by Chris Stevens
|wonderful write Jen....... are you sure you didn't steal the muse I sent to Josie!!!!!!!..... maybe holding it for ransom!!!!!!...
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Beautiful message and writing--love it, the art, and the music. Thank you for sharing it and the ending, as well...|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
As Buddha Said: All Is But An Illusion...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You have touched my soul...splendid piece...thank you|